Dragonball XP

SSj2Mitch · Post by **SSj2Mitch** » Wed Oct 24, 2001 12:28 am

FRAME 1
Goku:Shapeshifter?.. Cool, What else can you turn into?
SS:Uh... Lots of things.Frame 2
Goku:Like?
SS:Uh.. a bush, a shrub, a flower...Frame 3
Goku(puzzled look):Anything else than plants?
SS (sad look):No.. this is why i need your help..Frame 4
SS:I am a slave to the evil.. Martha Stuart she uses me and many more of our people as decorations at her house.
Goku:Why?

DarkSonic8000 · Post by **DarkSonic8000** » Wed Oct 24, 2001 1:00 am

Alright, Im new here, so here it goes.Panel 1
Goku: (evil grin) Shape Shifter...Hmmm
SS: (confused)What...?Panel 2
Goku: Think you could turn into a friend of mine and spook him?
SS: Uhhh...MaybePanel 3
Goku: (laughing histerically) MWAHAHAHAHAHA
SS: (confused look)?Panel 4
*Krillen in background*
Goku: (pointing to krillen)See him
SS: Yes
Goku: (excited) Turn into him, and say your his long lost evil twin from Tokyo------------------
...Step Into The Darkness...

The Jester · Post by **The Jester** » Wed Oct 24, 2001 1:25 am

PANEL 1
Goku: (An inquisitive look on his face.) So what can you change into you?
SS: (A smug grin on his face.) Anything really...PANEL 2
Goku: (A baffled look on his face.) Really?
SS: (Looks back at him.) Yeah, watch...PANEL 3
The Shape Shifter transforms into an exact copy of Goku.
Goku: (Wide-eyed.) Whoa!!!PANEL 4
Goku pokes the Shape Shifter.
Goku: I need to loose weight.

Kojini · Post by **Kojini** » Wed Oct 24, 2001 2:29 am

Okay, time for attempt #2._________
Panel 1:SS: Yes. That's right.Panel 2:Goku: Okay...so why were you a tree?Panel 3:SS: There's a good explanation for that. You see *cough cough* and then *cough cough* and so you see it all makes sense.

Animefanz@aol · Post by **Animefanz@aol** » Wed Oct 24, 2001 3:41 am

Frame 1
Goku; A shape... shifter?....SS: Yeah, you know... I "shift" my "shape" into stuff.Frame 2
Goku: Like what?
SS: ... anything realy!Frame 3
Goku: Cool! Then will you turn into a-
SS: NO!Frame 4
*Goku is going through a handfull of monney and change*Goku: What if I gave you 4...5..6 dollars and 26 cents... and this button!SS: (annoyed): ...Fine [thinking: ...god I hate this plannet!]

Cdc2 · Post by **Cdc2** » Wed Oct 24, 2001 4:09 am

radiodj19 asked what typed of scripts I am looking for (funny/serious/etc)It's still a bit too early to tell. By the time I've reached strip #10, people should get a pretty good idea what kind of storyline I'm going for. I'll try not to make things too predictable, tho, so once in a while a something really strange may pop up (not in terms of Monty Python strange, like an elephant suddenly dropping out of the sky and killing Goku <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/wink.gif"> )PS>.. Not every four panel strip has to have a punch line in the end. You'll notice the first two strips haven't ended in punchlines..

Cdc2 · Post by **Cdc2** » Wed Oct 24, 2001 4:19 am

I'll wait another day before picking a script. I've been told that I didn't give some people enough time to read this BBS and write a script the last time. ^_^;

Fx1013 · Post by **Fx1013** » Wed Oct 24, 2001 4:23 am

Here goes nothing.Panel 1
Goku: so you shift shapes, umm.. yeah
ss: yup...Panel 2
Goku: So...Wanna spar?
SS:no. But I need you help, It is very important!!Panel 3
Goku: ok then... later!
SS: ??? what Didn't you hear what I said!
I need your help!Panel 4
Goku (walks away)
SS: What the! Get Back here!! Hello? are you listening to me!

Kou · Post by **Kou** » Wed Oct 24, 2001 5:44 am

aight...umm a shapeshifters different.....but you know i think im jsut taht good,..hehe
Panal number 1-
Goku- A "shape-shifter" Wahts that?
::Goku gets behind him and looks at him head to toe.::Panal Number 2-
::the shape swhifter gets kinda scared taht this kid is lookign at him funny not knowing waht he is, posbily one of those sweat bubles::
Shape Shiftign thing- Hey, stop what... hey don't....STOP THAT!!!
::Gokus is lookign at him funny still::
Goku- Stop what??Panal 3-
Goku- Are you sure this wasn't about the apples i picked?
::the shapeshifter gets biger to try and intimidate goku::.::
Shapeshifter- IM NOT A TREE IM A SHAPE SHIFTER!!!Panal 4-
::Gokus scratching his head, tryign to figure otu what a shape shifter is::
Goku- A shape-shifter...so do you have any apples??
::the shapeshifer goes back to hsi orrigioanl size and is fallen over with his legs twitching in the air::you know you liked it! hehe------------------
Some fight for glory, some fight for honor, I fight so I can laugh at the other man when hes down.

PezHed · Post by **PezHed** » Wed Oct 24, 2001 6:07 am

Shapeshifter, eh? Hopefully I won't think mine is too stupid to post this time.Panel 1
Goku: Wow! A magic tree!
SS: Uh...n..no, I'm not a tree.Panel 2
Goku: (scratching head) You're confusing me, Mr. tree.Panel 3
SS: (frustrated) I'M NOT A TREE FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!!
Goku is cringing from the yellingPanel 4
SS: (regaining composure) Ahem. Let me start over...

Michelle · Post by **Michelle** » Wed Oct 24, 2001 7:20 am

Hrm. I should've given Shapeshifting Guy a turn to talk. But maybe he's just the quiet type.

Uh, imy strip might not make sense...sorry.I got my scanner working again, so expect more fanstrips! <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/biggrin.gif">------------------
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Lord Dap · Post by **Lord Dap** » Wed Oct 24, 2001 8:50 am

PANEL 1
Goku: (hand stroking invisible beard) So you can change things shapes, eh?
SS: Well yeah, sort of...PANEL 2
Goku: (eyes wide, pointing off screen) Oooooh! Then change that mountain into a bowl of STICKY RICE!!!PANEL 3
SS: (hands open before himself) No, you see I can only change mysel... (stops talking as Goku gives him an evil glare)PANEL 4
Goku (walking off screen) You're just mean.
SS: (following Goku, apologising) No, it's just that- I'm sorry, I- You see...

ZOMBIE USER 4659 · Post by **ZOMBIE USER 4659** » Wed Oct 24, 2001 9:01 am

Ok ... I'll try my hand at this.Frame 1
Goku: *scratching his head in confusion* Why were you discuised as a apple tree?
Shape-shifter: I was hiding from a great enemy of mine.Frame 2
*close up on the SS face*
Shape-shifter: His power is un-rivaled, he has nearly destroyed my entire race, and he is now here.Frame3
Goku: Why are you telling me this?Frame4
Shape-shifter: I felt great power in you as you were leaning against me.
Goku: Hey! I don't like being felt up! You trying to make me angry!
Shape-shifter: *sigh*The first shape-shifters line in the fourth frame could be in the third frame, I'm trying to make it so that a frame isn't over-clogged with bubbles.------------------
Plutonium.M
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I have no quote worth quoting.

Zackarotto · Post by **Zackarotto** » Wed Oct 24, 2001 10:19 am

Panel 1
SS: Yeah, a shape shifter. What did you think I said?
Goku: I see.Panel 2
Goku: Can I ask you a question?
SS: Sure... What is it?Panel 3
Goku: Do you turn into real items or do they just look real?
SS: It'll be real.Panel 4
Goku: (licks his lips) Then turn into some food, I'm starved!
SS: Sigh...

THE guy · Post by **THE guy** » Wed Oct 24, 2001 11:51 am

<IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/eek.gif"> <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/eek.gif"> <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/eek.gif"> !!!!!!!My script got chosen?!!! <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/confused.gif">My words, immortalized by the great CDC........ cool. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/biggrin.gif">So, am I allowed to submit for #3? Or do I have to sit this one out?------------------
Za?

Vel0sity · Post by **Vel0sity** » Thu Oct 25, 2001 12:04 am

ok here we go Panel 1:
Goku:I don't get it.
SS:Here let me show youPanel 2:
*SS turns into a dictionary Goku watches with a surprised look on his face*Panel 3:
Goku*reading from dictionary slowly*: Shape Shifter - special... person... who can change his shape.. into what... he wants...Panel 4:
*SS returns to normal*
SS:You get it now
Goku: Yes... oh wait no I don't.

Atomusuku-sama · Post by **Atomusuku-sama** » Thu Oct 25, 2001 12:22 am

Here's my contribution.PANEL 1
Now looking over Shape Shifter's right shoulder, looking down at Goku at a slight downward angel.
SS: Yes, I can take on any form I wish.
GOKU: Really?! Anything?PANEL 2
Similar shot as panel 1, but rotated some so you can see all of Goku. Goku is doing an odd gesture with his hands, concentrating on them.
SS: Yes, but that's not why I'm here, you see I need...
Goku: (interrupting) Can you make something like...PANEL 3
Profile shot of both facing each other. Shape shifter has an angry expression and is clenching is fist upright, a little vain pops out. Goku's hands are still raised, but are not gesturing. His look is half confused.
SS: LISTEN! I haven't got all day! This is very important.
GOKU: Eh! Oh sorry. So what's so important?PANEL 4
Dramatic shot. A large sound or explosion suddenly happens off screen. Both are startled, but the shape shifter more so.
SS: ...th that...
Goku: !?------------------
Blues Drive Monster[This message has been edited by Atomusuku-sama (edited 10-25-2001).]

Golden Warrior · Post by **Golden Warrior** » Thu Oct 25, 2001 12:38 am

Goku: (freaking out) OH NO!!! NOT A SHAPE-SHIFTER!!!Shape-shifter: Yes, a shape-shifter!!!Goku: NO!!!S-S: (getting ticked off)Yes! I'm...a...shape-shifter!Goku: (looking confused) What's a shape-shifter?S-S: (falls over anime-style)

THE guy · Post by **THE guy** » Thu Oct 25, 2001 12:49 am

Just a thought: I see that a small number of you are doing five panels, one person even did six. If you would read the rules at the top it says the maximum is FOUR PANELS.That is all...------------------
Za?

Nicko786 · Post by **Nicko786** » Thu Oct 25, 2001 1:21 am

Hey CDC. I was wondering. I like your idea of having members replying to your strips and suggest ideas. I like drawing comics too and I was wondering if I could use your idea. (Of having readers reply, not the art or characters) Thanks.