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Postby SSj2Mitch on Wed Oct 24, 2001 12:28 am

FRAME 1
Goku:Shapeshifter?.. Cool, What else can you turn into?
SS:Uh... Lots of things.<P>Frame 2
Goku:Like?
SS:Uh.. a bush, a shrub, a flower...<P>Frame 3
Goku(puzzled look):Anything else than plants?
SS (sad look):No.. this is why i need your help..<P>Frame 4
SS:I am a slave to the evil.. Martha Stuart she uses me and many more of our people as decorations at her house.
Goku:Why?
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Postby DarkSonic8000 on Wed Oct 24, 2001 1:00 am

Alright, Im new here, so here it goes.<P>Panel 1
Goku: (evil grin) Shape Shifter...Hmmm
SS: (confused)What...?<P>Panel 2
Goku: Think you could turn into a friend of mine and spook him?
SS: Uhhh...Maybe<P>Panel 3
Goku: (laughing histerically) MWAHAHAHAHAHA
SS: (confused look)?<P>Panel 4
*Krillen in background*
Goku: (pointing to krillen)See him
SS: Yes
Goku: (excited) Turn into him, and say your his long lost evil twin from Tokyo<P>------------------
...Step Into The Darkness...
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Postby The Jester on Wed Oct 24, 2001 1:25 am

PANEL 1
Goku: (An inquisitive look on his face.) So what can you change into you?
SS: (A smug grin on his face.) Anything really...<P>PANEL 2
Goku: (A baffled look on his face.) Really?
SS: (Looks back at him.) Yeah, watch...<P>PANEL 3
The Shape Shifter transforms into an exact copy of Goku.
Goku: (Wide-eyed.) Whoa!!!<P>PANEL 4
Goku pokes the Shape Shifter.
Goku: I need to loose weight.
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Postby Kojini on Wed Oct 24, 2001 2:29 am

Okay, time for attempt #2.<P>_________<P>
Panel 1:<P>SS: Yes. That's right.<P>Panel 2:<P>Goku: Okay...so why were you a tree?<P>Panel 3:<P>SS: There's a good explanation for that. You see *cough cough* and then *cough cough* and so you see it all makes sense.
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Postby Animefanz@aol on Wed Oct 24, 2001 3:41 am

Frame 1
Goku; A shape... shifter?....<P>SS: Yeah, you know... I "shift" my "shape" into stuff.<P>Frame 2
Goku: Like what?
SS: ... anything realy!<P>Frame 3
Goku: Cool! Then will you turn into a-
SS: NO!<P>Frame 4
*Goku is going through a handfull of monney and change*<P>Goku: What if I gave you 4...5..6 dollars and 26 cents... and this button!<P>SS: (annoyed): ...Fine [thinking: ...god I hate this plannet!]
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Postby Cdc2 on Wed Oct 24, 2001 4:09 am

radiodj19 asked what typed of scripts I am looking for (funny/serious/etc)<P>It's still a bit too early to tell. By the time I've reached strip #10, people should get a pretty good idea what kind of storyline I'm going for. I'll try not to make things too predictable, tho, so once in a while a something really strange may pop up (not in terms of Monty Python strange, like an elephant suddenly dropping out of the sky and killing Goku <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/wink.gif"> )<P>PS>.. Not every four panel strip has to have a punch line in the end. You'll notice the first two strips haven't ended in punchlines..
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Postby Cdc2 on Wed Oct 24, 2001 4:19 am

I'll wait another day before picking a script. I've been told that I didn't give some people enough time to read this BBS and write a script the last time. ^_^;
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Postby Fx1013 on Wed Oct 24, 2001 4:23 am

Here goes nothing.<P>Panel 1
Goku: so you shift shapes, umm.. yeah
ss: yup...<P>Panel 2
Goku: So...Wanna spar?
SS:no. But I need you help, It is very important!!<P>Panel 3
Goku: ok then... later!
SS: ??? what Didn't you hear what I said!
I need your help!<P>Panel 4
Goku (walks away)
SS: What the! Get Back here!! Hello? are you listening to me!
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Postby Kou on Wed Oct 24, 2001 5:44 am

aight...umm a shapeshifters different.....but you know i think im jsut taht good,..hehe<P>
Panal number 1-
Goku- A "shape-shifter" Wahts that?
::Goku gets behind him and looks at him head to toe.::<P>Panal Number 2-
::the shape swhifter gets kinda scared taht this kid is lookign at him funny not knowing waht he is, posbily one of those sweat bubles::
Shape Shiftign thing- Hey, stop what... hey don't....STOP THAT!!!
::Gokus is lookign at him funny still::
Goku- Stop what??<P>Panal 3-
Goku- Are you sure this wasn't about the apples i picked?
::the shapeshifter gets biger to try and intimidate goku::.::
Shapeshifter- IM NOT A TREE IM A SHAPE SHIFTER!!!<P>Panal 4-
::Gokus scratching his head, tryign to figure otu what a shape shifter is::
Goku- A shape-shifter...so do you have any apples??
::the shapeshifer goes back to hsi orrigioanl size and is fallen over with his legs twitching in the air::<P>you know you liked it! hehe<P><P>------------------
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Postby PezHed on Wed Oct 24, 2001 6:07 am

Shapeshifter, eh? Hopefully I won't think mine is too stupid to post this time.<P>Panel 1
Goku: Wow! A magic tree!
SS: Uh...n..no, I'm not a tree.<P>Panel 2
Goku: (scratching head) You're confusing me, Mr. tree.<P>Panel 3
SS: (frustrated) I'M NOT A TREE FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!!
Goku is cringing from the yelling<P>Panel 4
SS: (regaining composure) Ahem. Let me start over...
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Postby Michelle on Wed Oct 24, 2001 7:20 am

Hrm. I should've given Shapeshifting Guy a turn to talk. But maybe he's just the quiet type. :P<P>Uh, imy strip might not make sense...sorry.<P>I got my scanner working again, so expect more fanstrips! <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/biggrin.gif"><P>------------------
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Postby Lord Dap on Wed Oct 24, 2001 8:50 am

PANEL 1
Goku: (hand stroking invisible beard) So you can change things shapes, eh?
SS: Well yeah, sort of...<P>PANEL 2
Goku: (eyes wide, pointing off screen) Oooooh! Then change that mountain into a bowl of STICKY RICE!!!<P>PANEL 3
SS: (hands open before himself) No, you see I can only change mysel... (stops talking as Goku gives him an evil glare)<P>PANEL 4
Goku (walking off screen) You're just mean.
SS: (following Goku, apologising) No, it's just that- I'm sorry, I- You see...
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Postby ZOMBIE USER 4659 on Wed Oct 24, 2001 9:01 am

Ok ... I'll try my hand at this.<P>Frame 1
Goku: *scratching his head in confusion* Why were you discuised as a apple tree?
Shape-shifter: I was hiding from a great enemy of mine.<P>Frame 2
*close up on the SS face*
Shape-shifter: His power is un-rivaled, he has nearly destroyed my entire race, and he is now here.<P>Frame3
Goku: Why are you telling me this?<P>Frame4
Shape-shifter: I felt great power in you as you were leaning against me.
Goku: Hey! I don't like being felt up! You trying to make me angry!
Shape-shifter: *sigh*<P>The first shape-shifters line in the fourth frame could be in the third frame, I'm trying to make it so that a frame isn't over-clogged with bubbles.<P>------------------
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Postby Zackarotto on Wed Oct 24, 2001 10:19 am

Panel 1
SS: Yeah, a shape shifter. What did you think I said?
Goku: I see.<P>Panel 2
Goku: Can I ask you a question?
SS: Sure... What is it?<P>Panel 3
Goku: Do you turn into real items or do they just look real?
SS: It'll be real.<P>Panel 4
Goku: (licks his lips) Then turn into some food, I'm starved!
SS: Sigh...
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Postby THE guy on Wed Oct 24, 2001 11:51 am

<IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/eek.gif"> <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/eek.gif"> <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/eek.gif"> !!!!!!!<P>My script got chosen?!!! <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/confused.gif"><P>My words, immortalized by the great CDC........ cool. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/biggrin.gif"><P>So, am I allowed to submit for #3? Or do I have to sit this one out?<P>------------------
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Postby Vel0sity on Thu Oct 25, 2001 12:04 am

ok here we go <P>Panel 1:
Goku:I don't get it.
SS:Here let me show you<P>Panel 2:
*SS turns into a dictionary Goku watches with a surprised look on his face*<P>Panel 3:
Goku*reading from dictionary slowly*: Shape Shifter - special... person... who can change his shape.. into what... he wants...<P>Panel 4:
*SS returns to normal*
SS:You get it now
Goku: Yes... oh wait no I don't.
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Postby Atomusuku-sama on Thu Oct 25, 2001 12:22 am

Here's my contribution.<P><B>PANEL 1</B>
<I>Now looking over Shape Shifter's right shoulder, looking down at Goku at a slight downward angel.</I>
<B>SS</B>: Yes, I can take on any form I wish.
<B>GOKU</B>: Really?! Anything?<P><B>PANEL 2</B>
<I>Similar shot as panel 1, but rotated some so you can see all of Goku. Goku is doing an odd gesture with his hands, concentrating on them.</I>
<B>SS</B>: Yes, but that's not why I'm here, you see I need...
<B>Goku</B>: (interrupting) Can you make something like...<P><B>PANEL 3</B>
<I>Profile shot of both facing each other. Shape shifter has an angry expression and is clenching is fist upright, a little vain pops out. Goku's hands are still raised, but are not gesturing. His look is half confused.</I>
<B>SS</B>: LISTEN! I haven't got all day! This is very important.
<B>GOKU</B>: Eh! Oh sorry. So what's so important?<P><B>PANEL 4</B>
<I>Dramatic shot. A large sound or explosion suddenly happens off screen. Both are startled, but the shape shifter more so.</I>
<B>SS</B>: ...th that...
<B>Goku</B>: !?<P>------------------
Blues Drive Monster<p>[This message has been edited by Atomusuku-sama (edited 10-25-2001).]
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Postby Golden Warrior on Thu Oct 25, 2001 12:38 am

Goku: (freaking out) OH NO!!! NOT A SHAPE-SHIFTER!!!<P>Shape-shifter: Yes, a shape-shifter!!!<P>Goku: NO!!!<P>S-S: (getting ticked off)Yes! I'm...a...shape-shifter!<P>Goku: (looking confused) What's a shape-shifter?<P>S-S: (falls over anime-style)
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Postby THE guy on Thu Oct 25, 2001 12:49 am

Just a thought: I see that a small number of you are doing five panels, one person even did six. If you would read the rules at the top it says the maximum is FOUR PANELS.<P>That is all...<P>------------------
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Postby Nicko786 on Thu Oct 25, 2001 1:21 am

Hey CDC. I was wondering. I like your idea of having members replying to your strips and suggest ideas. I like drawing comics too and I was wondering if I could use your idea. (Of having readers reply, not the art or characters) Thanks.
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