How's the Story?
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Ruxen
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How's the Story?
I get the feeling that the story is moving too slow, which might be a side affect of 4 updates a month. To give you an idea of chapter length, most chapters will be at least 40 pages, chapter 1 may even be a little longer.
So, is it dragging, just fine, or going too fast?
So, is it dragging, just fine, or going too fast?
- Lewellynthedolphin
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Hiya. The storyline is moving just a tad too slowly. It's a really good storyline, but it's gonna get hard to follow after a couple of months.
~Lewwy
~Lewwy
"We danced above a world forgotten, moments cherished even now" (The Crüxshadows - Cassandra)
"Love hurts, but sometimes it's a good hurt, and it makes me feel alive." (Incubus - Love Hurts)
"Love hurts, but sometimes it's a good hurt, and it makes me feel alive." (Incubus - Love Hurts)
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- Lewellynthedolphin
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Mmmm, yes, they're right. the pacingprobably isnt that bad, it's just that 4 updates a month make it seem slow.
~lewwy
~lewwy
"We danced above a world forgotten, moments cherished even now" (The Crüxshadows - Cassandra)
"Love hurts, but sometimes it's a good hurt, and it makes me feel alive." (Incubus - Love Hurts)
"Love hurts, but sometimes it's a good hurt, and it makes me feel alive." (Incubus - Love Hurts)
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Ruxen
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Don't worry once May rolls around it'll update twice a week. This summer I'm going to try to get a buffer going too, so hopefully the twice a week updates will will stick around all year instead of for just three months.
You wonderful folks will visit the forum and tell me how the pacing is over the summer right? Riiight?
You wonderful folks will visit the forum and tell me how the pacing is over the summer right? Riiight?
- Lewellynthedolphin
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Yup. ^_^ I know I will. It's always fun. It also gives me a chance to look at what else is being written around here. ^_^
~lewwy
~lewwy
"We danced above a world forgotten, moments cherished even now" (The Crüxshadows - Cassandra)
"Love hurts, but sometimes it's a good hurt, and it makes me feel alive." (Incubus - Love Hurts)
"Love hurts, but sometimes it's a good hurt, and it makes me feel alive." (Incubus - Love Hurts)
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