I call PSC!
OK! I only have a couple things I didn't entirely like;
- The lawsuit storyline was a bit too cut-and-dried...I had no sense that it was that big a threat.
Sure, the legal ace was there who wrapped it up, but it was too quick. I would have liked to have seen some more to it...a few plot twists would have been cool. Dr. Lauren is an obvious poke at Dr. Laura. Why not play on the real Dr. Laura's situation with her real-life nude pics? See, we're glad the case turned out OK, but I only wish the bad guy had gotten a more thorough trouncing.
- You won't tell me how you get those PERFECT SPEED LINES!!! I simply cannot do that yet! PM me, PLEASE!!!!
- I wish I could read your stuff at work!
Uh, as I said, not much I was upset by...