Storylines and Feedback. . .

Kev of the Apocalypse · Tue Apr 03, 2001 5:00 am

Okay, if you have any comments on KW story, characters, or questions on past story, put it here. I'll answer to the best of my abilities.------------------
Kevin of the Apocalypse<A HREF="http://www.kotasworld.com" TARGET=_blank>Kota's World</A>
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Saving the net from bad guys and themselves.

BeanieWeenie · Post by **BeanieWeenie** » Tue Apr 03, 2001 5:05 am

What happened to Scott!! He is one of my favorite characters. When will you put him back in.------------------
My weenies are the tastiest!!

Vota · Post by **Vota** » Tue Apr 03, 2001 8:11 am

What ever happened to the "fan art" page? Why isn't that ingenious, super-gorgeous Vota included more often? <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/biggrin.gif"> What if Yip is merely the protrusion into our dimension of vast, hyperintelligent transdimensional beings, and knows all the lottery numbers for the next hundred years?What if King Features Syndicate picked up KW tomorrow? Would you be able to keep up? <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/wink.gif">What if I asked a serious question here? *KAFFKAFFKAFF!* comes of lung-infection-induced delirium. Pay it no mind.

Lewis · Post by **Lewis** » Sat Apr 07, 2001 10:54 am

We really need to see more of the elderly on fire..------------------
Curiosity may have killed the cat, but at least he didn

Kev of the Apocalypse · Mon Apr 09, 2001 2:35 am

Hi DeMatt. First, thanks for constructive criticism. It's hard to find. Secondly, thanks for saying the art has improved. And now the rest. . .As I've said, I've come a long way with the storytelling. The period that's appearantly giving you the most trouble is the one that gave ME the most trouble. "The Boat" story has been considered my worst period, but I have learned from it. Believe it or not there is some explaination coming in the next storyline and the one after. I'm trying very hard to keep the stories moving at a decent pace, but being Tuesdays, Thursdays, and Sundays kinda limits things.
Okay. Dropdown seperation. Kinda new at it, and like I said, storylines took too long in the begining.
Destiny not in the profiles: Okay. Fine. I'm lazy :O Don't worry. It's coming. Anyway, thanks for taking the time to comment.------------------
Kevin of the Apocalypse<A HREF="http://www.kotasworld.com" TARGET=_blank>Kota's World</A>
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Saving the net from bad guys and themselves.

DeMatt · Post by **DeMatt** » Mon Apr 09, 2001 11:28 am

*ping*
Accessing new location...
Examining new location...
-name: "Kota's World"
-class: online comic/?MWF/B-W/large
Analyzing "Kota's World"...
-Warning: unlogic level exceeding analysis limits!
-Warning: compensation units overloading!
-Warning: recommend escape/evasion/abort
-CMD selected: continue/adjust limits
Resetting analysis limits...
Analyzing "Kota's World"...
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-Analysis completed
-Net-life comic (ref: "Gaming Guardians")
-Backstory not fully explained at any point
-Story confusing (query: bad guys not just opponents of good guys?)
-Storyline separation in dropdown poor (ref: 4 storylines * 1 year of comics)
-Characters randomly introduced (ref: big battle w/Grimm)
-Character info not complete (ref: Destiny char not mentioned)
-Artwork good/improving, occasional color
-Recommend occasional (1/month) review to recheck analysis
Analysis stored...
Exiting "Kota's World"...
*ping*------------------
Crewman: "Sir! An enemy ship is approaching! Can't scan its defenses!"
Captain: "Very well... ARM PHASE CANNON!"
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De enemies just ran roughshod over DeMatt...

MasterGeebo · Post by **MasterGeebo** » Wed Apr 11, 2001 12:20 am

*ping*
>Set scan
>Activating
>Activating
>Activating
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>Blue Screen of Death
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*grumble*

Kev of the Apocalypse · Wed Apr 11, 2001 5:59 am

ACK! Falling behind on question answering!Lewis - Elderly on fire? I'm not sure. You know what's coming up though, so don't say a thing!Vota - Fan art page. Right. Let me get some actual fan art besides yours and Geebo's and we'll see soon enough (hint hint to HD and that Sheila pic! <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/wink.gif"> ). I don't think so on syndication. Not enough room on a comics page for this turkey.End of Line.*ping*------------------
Kevin of the Apocalypse<A HREF="http://www.kotasworld.com" TARGET=_blank>Kota's World</A>
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Saving the net from bad guys and themselves.

MasterGeebo · Post by **MasterGeebo** » Thu Apr 12, 2001 5:57 am

Um, are Mike and that deamon doin' it? Cause I thought that the deamon was a guy or something close to that.MG

Kev of the Apocalypse · Thu Apr 12, 2001 6:15 am

<A HREF="http://kotasworld.keenspace.com/d/20010128.html" TARGET=_blank>http://kotasworld.keenspace.com/d/20010128.html</A> Your answer the guy thing is here. Even if it is a badly drawn answer for my more recent strips.------------------
Kevin of the Apocalypse<A HREF="http://www.kotasworld.com" TARGET=_blank>Kota's World</A>
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Saving the net from bad guys and themselves.

Catamount · Post by **Catamount** » Sat Apr 14, 2001 10:36 am

Are you saying I'm gonna have to start cranking out fan art of my own just to see what other peeps have drawn? Bummer.I agree with DeMatt. Update the profiles page. Ther'es a lot of characters we, erm, I know little about. But anyway, overall I like the storylines and the art is nifty. (This from the one who can't draw people. Furres, but not people...)--Catamount "And the strong, female characters that can kick ass are a plus too..." Sa'Furre En'Ridgewood

Kev of the Apocalypse · Sun Apr 15, 2001 6:42 am

Hello again Cat!
Okay, fan art. Vota sent me a pic of the Jolly Homer a while back. I'm still gonna put it up, but it needs some company. I've had some promised, so I'm waiting on it to show.
I'll be working on the profile pics for other characters sometime next week. Work's been rough, so it may take some time. The problem is not wanting to say too much about Destiny yet! She's got alot to her that I don't want revealed, so hers may be a temporary file.
Thanks for the compliments. Nothing wrong with furries though! Furries rock! And as for females kicking ass, you should love what's coming. . .------------------
Kevin of the Apocalypse<A HREF="http://www.kotasworld.com" TARGET=_blank>Kota's World</A>
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Saving the net from bad guys and themselves.

Vota · Post by **Vota** » Sun Apr 15, 2001 8:12 am

Um, legal note...it still says "copyright 2000" on the bottom of each comic. Several months outa date, or my calendar is fubar'd! As for recent developments, I think Mike is making a mistake...Iowa the Demon may not be what she appears to be... <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/wink.gif">

Mike nln · Post by **Mike nln** » Mon Apr 16, 2001 5:49 am

Kevin: you shoul put up the comic I drew in the fan art page <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif">Crap! Why didn't anyone tell me I still had the year 2000 at the bottom of the color comics! I just paste the comics onto a pre-made background after I'm done coloring them, and I never noticed!How retarded am I?where am I?------------------
Mike RutherfordColorist and Contributing Editor of
<A HREF="http://www.kotasworld.com" TARGET=_blank>http://www.kotasworld.com</A>

Vota · Post by **Vota** » Mon Apr 16, 2001 7:48 am

Don't feel too bad, Mike, I didn't notice it until this week either! Cat..grammar mixed with old wartime acronyms? What a quaint notion! SNAFU, FUMTU, FUBAR and a whole page of others were invented during WW2 and the period after. There's even a dictionary, I'm told!It ain't good talkin' to say things like FUBAR when dere is ladies present, but like it always be SNAFU anyhoo. Ah, I am no good at this. Us Canadians are the only ones around who knows how to talk good English!

Kev of the Apocalypse · Mon Apr 16, 2001 8:01 am

Oh, Vota. Just wanted to say I liked the "Yip" thing you talked about. Can I expect a paper soon to go with the O'tan article you wrote? I like it much. ------------------
Kevin of the Apocalypse<A HREF="http://www.kotasworld.com" TARGET=_blank>Kota's World</A>
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Saving the net from bad guys and themselves.

Catamount · Post by **Catamount** » Mon Apr 16, 2001 10:05 am

That's pretty retarded Mike <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/wink.gif">Hey Vota, that's the first time I've seen that term used on the net. Made me laugh for some odd reason. Probably because my brother and I have debates over how to put it in a proper gramatical context but since we're both sound beleivers in "We don' need no stinkin grammar!" we usually just decide that the whole thing is completely fubar'd. Riiiight...
*wanders away aimlessly*
--Catamount "Ya." Sa'Furre En'Ridgewood

Vota · Post by **Vota** » Tue Apr 17, 2001 7:25 am

What, you need more details? You mean I gotta THINK again? Ayayay!!
Well, it shouldn't be too hard. Now that I have gone missing again, perhaps in some Yippi jail cell, I will have lots of time to scratch my theories on the cell wall. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif">
I think Yip presents a lot of possibilities, and it never hurts for readers to explore and add detail to this and other characters.
C'mon, humans, you expect Kota to do EVERY thing?? Yeesh!!

Asrian · Post by **Asrian** » Tue Apr 17, 2001 10:51 am

Yes...actually we do....he doesn't do anything else of worthy note............ <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/biggrin.gif">------------------
One bitch in the world, one bitch with many faces.

Asrian · Post by **Asrian** » Tue Apr 17, 2001 11:25 am

Yes...where are the Mad flesh eating goats of Doom (No relation to Master Geebo's father), and the but naked bitches?
Oh, and animated tater tots....can't forget those!------------------
One bitch in the world, one bitch with many faces.