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JB_Ping972 · Post by **JB_Ping972** » Sun Mar 18, 2001 4:54 am

People,
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Night Stalker · Post by **Night Stalker** » Sun Mar 18, 2001 7:19 am

Wonderful comic! It's cool to see a webcomic in Hebrew!! (Even though I can barely translate any of it...) The flash is a wonderful idea; the downside is that I can't save a particularly clever comic as a .jpg for later viewing (or emailing friends)...
The distinct drawing style is interesting, and I think I so far sort of prefer it without expressions. Suggestions:1) Some storylines would be interesting...
2) Some commentary on Israel (not just the Palestinian situation, but everything) would make the comic stand out. Virtually every webcomic takes place in the US or some fantasy land - locating this one firmly and realistically in the Middle East would make it more distinct and interesting. (Not that I want it to turn into a political cartoon, or anything...)Kol HaKavod!

Try67 · Post by **Try67** » Mon Mar 19, 2001 4:12 am

<BLOCKQUOTE>quote:<HR>2) Some commentary on Israel (not just the Palestinian situation, but everything) would make the comic stand out. Virtually every webcomic takes place in the US or some fantasy land - locating this one firmly and realistically in the Middle East would make it more distinct and interesting. (Not that I want it to turn into a political cartoon, or anything...)<HR></BLOCKQUOTE>Actually, some of the strips did include references to local Israeli politics (especially the one about Wolfstein, which made to literally LOL) in their Hebrew version, but were translated to something else in the English one ("zionist propoganda" in the Wolfstein strip) - which is understandable, since the humor in that is restricted to those who are familier with Israeli politics, and would probably seem pretty odd to others.I agree with you but think that the very fact the strip takes place in Israel gives it a special touch and differs it from other gamers comics online - which is a good thing.More feedback soon, keep up the good work JB & Pazi.

Psyke · Post by **Psyke** » Mon Mar 19, 2001 4:55 am

F-E-E-D-M-E!!!!! ------------------
I own j00!

JB_Ping972 · Post by **JB_Ping972** » Tue Mar 20, 2001 3:57 am

Hmm... oddly enough, the more we get into the strip, the more it seems to me that the local industry does pretty much tend to keep up with the rest of the world (Pazi would argue, I bet). Although that whole Dreamcast issue is still totally surreal...Does anyone else think the English version looks kind of ODD when it gets flipped over? I draw the images right-to-left, so when you turn them over, you can SEE that some of them are flipped. Maybe it's just me.JB.

N0Nick · Post by **N0Nick** » Fri Mar 23, 2001 2:20 am

<BLOCKQUOTE>quote:<HR>Originally posted by try67:
 Actually, some of the strips did include references to local Israeli politics (especially the one about Wolfstein, which made to literally LOL) in their Hebrew version, but were translated to something else in the English one ("zionist propoganda" in the Wolfstein strip) - which is understandable, since the humor in that is restricted to those who are familier with Israeli politics, and would probably seem pretty odd to others.<HR></BLOCKQUOTE>I read every single strip from day one to now, and I don't remember any "wolfstein" strip..
Can you provide the specific date (link would be even nicer <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/wink.gif"> )?------------------
I like work. I can sit and watch it for hours.

Try67 · Post by **Try67** » Wed Mar 28, 2001 8:56 am

<BLOCKQUOTE>quote:<HR>Originally posted by N0Nick:
 I read every single strip from day one to now, and I don't remember any "wolfstein" strip..
Can you provide the specific date (link would be even nicer <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/wink.gif"> )?<HR></BLOCKQUOTE>First of all, I misspelled it - "Wolfenstein".
Here's the link for ya - <A HREF="http://section972.keenspace.com/d/20001227.html" TARGET=_blank>http://section972.keenspace.com/d/20001227.html</A> (It almost killed me and my IE6 finding it...)Do you read the Hebrew version of the strips, or the English one? the text is not the same in this strip (which is extra-funny in it's own special, meta, way).