MixedMyth wrote:I like the body. The head seems a little bit at odds with it, though I can't put my finger on why. Still, nice pose!
I think its the face. The head itself seems to be turned at an angle that has the face looking down into the shoulder, instead the face seems to be independent from the face and looking in the wrong direction/angle, if anyone can get what I mean here, with the head angled right and down, and the face angled right and up. Head + face =/= flush, is what I'm trying to say