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November 30: So Calli<small><sub>character</sub></small> has the same realname as Calli<small><sub>artist</sub></small>... I guess she's more of an author's-character than I thought.<P>December 1: Calli's shedding! <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif"> Her hair seems much messier (as hair, not as art) than usual, and some of it seems to have fallen onto her cloak. (Wrinkles? But I like the idea of blue hair all over!) Oh, wait, her hair's messy yesterday too. Look, continuity!<P>December 2: The clothes and bodies are great today. The bodies aren't missing pieces, and everything is in the right place, except for Calli's left arm in panel 2, which is too small, and Joachim's left arm in panel 3, which looks vaguely wrong - attached in the wrong place maybe? The clothes hang and stretch and wrinkle uncommonly realistically. I love Calli's expression in panel 2. Joachim's in panel 1 is nice too, although it doesn't fit his words.<P>Are they going shopping for <em>armor</em>?
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<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Ydracth:
<B>November 30: So Calli<small><sub>character</sub></small> has the same realname as Calli<small><sub>artist</sub></small>... I guess she's more of an author's-character than I thought.<P>December 1: Calli's shedding! <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif"> Her hair seems much messier (as hair, not as art) than usual, and some of it seems to have fallen onto her cloak. (Wrinkles? But I like the idea of blue hair all over!) Oh, wait, her hair's messy yesterday too. Look, continuity!<P>December 2: The clothes and bodies are great today. The bodies aren't missing pieces, and everything is in the right place, except for Calli's left arm in panel 2, which is too small, and Joachim's left arm in panel 3, which looks vaguely wrong - attached in the wrong place maybe? The clothes hang and stretch and wrinkle uncommonly realistically. I love Calli's expression in panel 2. Joachim's in panel 1 is nice too, although it doesn't fit his words.<P>Are they going shopping for <em>armor</em>?</B><HR></BLOCKQUOTE><P>Er...thanks for the critique...
But bear in mind, I was ill when I drew those 3 strips...and somewhat rushed.
(by the by, I'm getting better, but not 100% yet...)<P>------------------
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<B>November 30: So Calli<small><sub>character</sub></small> has the same realname as Calli<small><sub>artist</sub></small>... I guess she's more of an author's-character than I thought.<P>December 1: Calli's shedding! <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif"> Her hair seems much messier (as hair, not as art) than usual, and some of it seems to have fallen onto her cloak. (Wrinkles? But I like the idea of blue hair all over!) Oh, wait, her hair's messy yesterday too. Look, continuity!<P>December 2: The clothes and bodies are great today. The bodies aren't missing pieces, and everything is in the right place, except for Calli's left arm in panel 2, which is too small, and Joachim's left arm in panel 3, which looks vaguely wrong - attached in the wrong place maybe? The clothes hang and stretch and wrinkle uncommonly realistically. I love Calli's expression in panel 2. Joachim's in panel 1 is nice too, although it doesn't fit his words.<P>Are they going shopping for <em>armor</em>?</B><HR></BLOCKQUOTE><P>Er...thanks for the critique...
But bear in mind, I was ill when I drew those 3 strips...and somewhat rushed.
(by the by, I'm getting better, but not 100% yet...)<P>------------------
POCKET -- <A HREF="http://calliope.keenspace.com/" TARGET=_blank>http://calliope.keenspace.com/</A>
See what happens when a Literature-Classics double-major decides to make a comic.