The art:Spaceprincess wrote:
Okay the first thing that caught my eye in this one was Miss Tex's face, oh grife that face, with no offence meant to your style that face just looks weirdly drawn the way that nose sticks off the side of the face.
Once again I must praise your use of hatching to add a sense of volume and texture to the image.
The line-work has nice variation, fairly smoothly done with the exception of the table which I am going to assume was rushed to complete at the end of the hour.
The cloudy background adds a nice sense of actual volume to the environment, the picture isn't just floating on a white background.
The stiffness of the pharaoh as opposed to Miss Tex would normally be a little jarring but, assuming you drew it this way on purpose, it works for an ancient Egyptian.
And finally the boobs, the undershading gives a great sense of volume and they're positioned a lot better than some I've seen but the cleavage line just isn't right.
The gag:
Ah yes the old I've never played before gag, believe it or not people actually try that line in real life, and I am no longer allowed at a certain local club because of my reaction to said line.
As a joke it's not that funny and the insertion of the cellphone is a bit sloppy.
The art:IVstudios wrote:
First impressions are good on this one, the composition is nicely balanced.
Line-work is mostly smooth on this image, with a fair amount of variation but again, as with last time, the bold outlines don't quite blend with the inner lines where body-parts overlap such as the jaw outline but again this is more a personal taste thing.
The ghost is nicely drawn, the subtle transparencies are a very nice touch.
A bit of sloppiness is evident in the way the car is drawn but the way the rest of the picture is composed makes it so one would not really notice unless they were looking for it.
The gag:
The ghost? Let me guess death by pun?
Beyond that I'm guessing the joke is one of those "wacky guy isn't as funny as he thinks things"?
The art:VeryCuddlyCornpone wrote: Here smine:
Your storybook styling creates an interesting twist on what could potentially be a bland or macabre scene, and that is one rather cute satan, I'd be tempted to give him a noogie.
Line-work and shading is a little sloppy in the second frame, especially on Satan where the hatching is uneven and overlaps in many places.
Still on Satan for a moment, the anatomy here is very sloppy with the noodly arms and misshapen body, which I'll have to
assume (based on the decent anatomy of the rest of the image) is a result of rushing to complete.
The scribbly background is more consistent than your previous entry and rather fitting for the gloomy atmosphere needed for the setting.
Also if I didn't know I was supposed to be looking for Texas in the picture I would not have had a clue what that shape was, but then again if I was to draw one of Australia's states I would be surprised if an American recognized it so this is more a cultural thing than an artistic one.
The gag:
Those guys don't strike me as the brightest in the box, they don't quite seem to grasp the seriousness of their situation.
The joke itself would have worked just as well without the final subtitle.
And a final note to all:
Integration of the elements here was a little on the sloppy side, in each one there seemed to be at least one element which was just sandwiched in because it was required rather than thoughtfully integrated.
Gah. This was a particularly frustrating one for me.