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Please feel free to critique. I need it.

Please check out my horror manga beliar, and tell me what you think! beliar summary... Djibril is desperately trying to find happiness in life. It's really hard being that her boyfriend denies their relationship around others, and everyone in school shuns her like the plague. Why would anyone do suc...

http://www.yokomolotov.com/necroad2.jpg I hope this is in the right place to post this, but I just wanted everyone to know that my first manga graphic novel entitled "NecrOphealia" is being published via Demented Dragon Books and Games (http://www.dementeddragon.com). (I used to post here earlier t...

Well honestly, I think you have a pretty solid art style, and a pleasing toning style. The site is a little plain but in time you can change that for the better. As for the story, its way too early to tell, but I have to tell ya I agree with the others in saying that you should defiantly change the ...

my bad.... um.. lets see


http://www.yokomolotov.com/ms.html

http://www.yokomolotov.com/fanart.jpg

lets see now...

btw thanks for the compliments!

This is one some one did of my character Audri:
http://www.yokomolotov.com/fanart.jpg

and heres one i did for the web manga Wanomagayo!

Finally my comic has made it to 20 pages so here it is, I am pitching it. Stray Crayons is my first ever professional comic since I was going to enter it in RSoM6, but entered a manga called NecrOphealia instead (which made top 20)... I decided Stray Crayons was too complex for a 20 page one shot so...

Hopefully, this newest comic will satisfy that background suggestion, with which I wholeheartedly agree, by the way. Up until recently, I wasn't good enough at drawing them to want to include them, but I've gotten to the point now where I'll be adding more. Screentones...that's a good idea. Hard to...

I think you use way too many screentones. They kind of muddle the lines, so maybe you should thicken your lines? Anyway, just my impression. I ve been getting a lot of that lately. Since all of part One is finished there wont be any tone improvement until Part 2. I appreciate the critique and Im go...

I was wondering what you guys think about my comic (in the banner below). My keenspace account is not functional yet so I have it on this temperary site. I started Stray Crayons last summer for the RSOMC but opted for another story instead. Anyway This will be a three part mini series.

-yoko

Really nice stuff!

Your art reminds me a lot of Bone and Pogo. Nice stuff.

Cool, sorry I misunderstood. ^-^

STOP. USING. FRONTPAGE. It's been told to you a few times now in this thread. Here is what you need to do to (very most likely) fix your problem: 1) open NOTEPAD. Start - Run - notepad.exe 2) Copy the index template code from Gear to this file and call it indextemplate.html. Save it somewhere. 3) C...

After all that, I am still at a loss. According to the Keen Space Cadets manual, you are to upload all images into the public image folder, all webpages to the workspace webpage folder. I did this yet nothing seems to come up. :( Also, In the keenspace cadet manual when editing templates it suggests...

http://forums.comicgenesis.com/viewtopic.php?t=72495
This is why. No one can log in right now.

Now when I start SmartFTP to upload my comics and such, CG's server is denying my password. I haven't changed the password since the last time it has uploaded sucessfully. Any ideas? [11:59:57] USER yokomolotov [11:59:57] 331 User yokomolotov OK. Password required [11:59:57] PASS (hidden) [11:59:57]...

I used front page. So if I build the page with front page, is it always going to be broken like that? Even if I cut and paste and save on notepad before uploading?

PS

I think I figured it out, and everythings back to normal, Im gonna try customing it tommorrow! Thanks!

Okay. I did all the steps. I was told to "reset" the templates. I downloaded the index and daily templates. I opened them locally in Front Page, erased all HTML and pasted the original HTML from the FAQ sticky in each. I then went to step 4. It did not ask me if I wanted to rewrite old files though....

yeahduff wrote:Brodie will fucking kill you.

Thats the way I'd wanna go...