"The Big Day" crit welcome

[CausNEphekt]

hey everybody. my friend chris and I just put up our comic. it's about a bear named adolf.

www.thebigday.smackjeeves.com

we only have 2 up right now, but i have like 40 written haha. let us know what you think

[Orinocou]

Your comics aren't bad; the first one actually made me laugh. Though I think you may need to clean up the lineart a bit; some of it was kind of messy.
However, don't you think it would be best to wait until you have a good archive of comics (say, like 20 pages) before you begin to promote it?

[CausNEphekt]

this is true hahah.

my bad. ill be back when there is more to judge

[Scraps]

Slow your roll, son. Read the rules of pitching before posting, at least 20 to 30 strips are required. The first strip wasn't bad but we need a lot more to make a fair assessment. I liked the use of mixed media utilizing both photos and line drawing, I do the same thing on my strip www.gunsnreligion.com but you need to take some time to clean up your scanned images.

[CausNEphekt]

thanks for the feedback. and my bad...i should've read those rules you got there haha.

i'll update this forum once we got around 20 or 30. hopefully it'll be worth the wait