So i finally made an animation

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Fourdays
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So i finally made an animation

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....Based off my webcomic, what do you guys think?

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Re: So i finally made an animation

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I would've ended on the endy line, and moved that last scene to after THE END as a sort of 'after the credits' movie, because that as an ending felt very forced and all. Otherwise, enjoyed it, felt like a decent trailer to a comic. Amusing plot. Definately felt like it belonged to a comic, though. I thought it was cute, the voices worked, and everything. I liked the emo guy. And the girl with the purple tipped hair--that's what I'm planning to do to my hair. 8-)
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Re: So i finally made an animation

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Alright. I think really the mic work was the weakest point. It gets distracting hearing the variation between hisses. :(
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