NEW COMIC - Full page artwork - Supernaturals Presents

[Falconire]

I have a new webcomic to display. It's about people in the late 19th century with supernatural powers. It's a full page, b/w, serious story. I'm the writer - Andy Woodyard. My artists name is Andres Carranza.

I appreciate any feedback btw.


http://www.supernaturalspresents.com

[Koad]

Very nice art, I like the retro style. I'd suggest trying to make the characters more distinctive, I found it a little hard to tell the characters apart. There are also some grammatical gaffes, e.g. in act4 it should be "sleep tight", not "slept tight"; and in act 5 "so what do I owe the pleasure" should be "to what do I owe the pleasure". I found it a little surprising that 7 acres of land could cost "millions" in 1887. And it'd be nice to have navigation buttons at the end of the comic too, so we don't have to scroll back up to turn the page. But these are all little things that can be easily fixed, overall it's quite good. Keep working, I'll keep reading.

ps. according to forum rules this forum is really for comics with at least 20 strips in the archive, in the future you might want to post your threads in the "Technique Tips and Tricks" forum, until you reach the magic number. Just so the mods don't turn into bears and come after you