Here's a sample of my one panel comic strip called "true stories".
You can see more of the strip at my website http://www.jtrue.com
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dark side of the moon and other true stories
The Dark side of the moon comic is great.
The Cow comic is great, if a little dirty.
The door-to-door evangelists wasn't great. It betrays stereo-typing and prejudice.
Wild flowers was rather amusing.
Okay, your comic seems to revolve around puns a lot. Puns can be funny. I think back to how often I've laughed at a well-placed pun in Futurama or any of the Blizzard games or even episodes of Family Guy.
However, Puns (I think) belong in the background. They are little bits of humor seasoning used in the background, not the main course.
Consider the Cow Tipping one. Now, if there was a few panels about it (say something about the aleins maybe?) and they casually walk into a bar and see the cow bartender with that sign, then it would be funny. Yet, with no other content around it is just kind of "meh."
The Cow comic is great, if a little dirty.
The door-to-door evangelists wasn't great. It betrays stereo-typing and prejudice.
Wild flowers was rather amusing.
Okay, your comic seems to revolve around puns a lot. Puns can be funny. I think back to how often I've laughed at a well-placed pun in Futurama or any of the Blizzard games or even episodes of Family Guy.
However, Puns (I think) belong in the background. They are little bits of humor seasoning used in the background, not the main course.
Consider the Cow Tipping one. Now, if there was a few panels about it (say something about the aleins maybe?) and they casually walk into a bar and see the cow bartender with that sign, then it would be funny. Yet, with no other content around it is just kind of "meh."
