Fractured Comics is the love child of William Duke: Writer, Artist, Lunatic. The current comic is Radioactive Nerds, a super-hero parody about a group of average nerds that come in contact with radioactive wastes. Past projects include The Nerdening, a one-shot full length comic that must be read to be comprehended (and even then good luck).
Current Comic: Radioactive Nerds
Website: http://fracturedcomics.comicgenesis.com/
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Fractured Comics
Fractured Comics
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Great art, though the truck in the current one looks a little deformed, nice and cartoony, but the wheels on the cab look out of place, like they arent attatched...
I do like the people's faces, you can tell who different people are... wish i could do that. Also the faces remind me of traditional British comics like Commando, and there's nowhere near enough stuff drawn like that around.
Speech bubbles are a little confusd though, all crammed together... sometimes a little decompression and spreading out of things into more panels IS good
...actually, the actual panel your preview image is taken from reminds me of "Student Grant" out of Viz
I do like the people's faces, you can tell who different people are... wish i could do that. Also the faces remind me of traditional British comics like Commando, and there's nowhere near enough stuff drawn like that around.
Speech bubbles are a little confusd though, all crammed together... sometimes a little decompression and spreading out of things into more panels IS good
...actually, the actual panel your preview image is taken from reminds me of "Student Grant" out of Viz
I MAKE MANY COMICS / Some are on paper! / Used to have one on Keenspace too...
"The lettering in children's comics has grown larger and simpler, as have the kids" - Lew Stringer
"The lettering in children's comics has grown larger and simpler, as have the kids" - Lew Stringer
Thanks for the comments! I'm glad you liked it.
The comic script originally had this beast at thirty pages, but I toned and tweaked it down to an (estimated) 20 page running length. Because of that some panels may seem a little cramped. Live and learn, though. Next issue I will cover less material, so the problem is being corrected. It will just take some time...
As for the truck? Well the blessing of my style is that I am allowed a little levity on any mistakes. I don't feel it's too much of a distraction, and in fact it adds to the chaotic nature of the panel, so I won't be correcting it. Good eye though.
The comic script originally had this beast at thirty pages, but I toned and tweaked it down to an (estimated) 20 page running length. Because of that some panels may seem a little cramped. Live and learn, though. Next issue I will cover less material, so the problem is being corrected. It will just take some time...
As for the truck? Well the blessing of my style is that I am allowed a little levity on any mistakes. I don't feel it's too much of a distraction, and in fact it adds to the chaotic nature of the panel, so I won't be correcting it. Good eye though.
"I'm so cool I can quote myself" ~Stank