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Sharkfin
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After putting 130 comics on my site, I've finally decided on a cast of regular characters. I don't plan to stick to them exclusively. My comic will still be rather scatter brained, but they'll give me a theme to come back to.

I've even added a characters' description page to my site. Please let me know what you guys think :D
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Post by Jin-roh »

Not bad, not bad. Thanks for the non-comic sans font. It looks great. I had a question about one of the characters though:

"subtly sarcastic. She’s quiet, with a memory like a steal trap, and smart, but tends to take things too literally."

Sarcastic people tend not to fall into the "take things to literally" category. Can you expound?

Other than that it looks cool. Maybe you should divide between "main" and "supporting" cast? Of course, who am I to give advice? I don't have a characters page yet.
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Post by Redtech »

Works for me. Mine has only 3 characters and has more words than yours!
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She will make the mistake of taking things too literally at first. It's part of the naivety that comes with being a kid. But she is smart enough to catch her mistakes soon enough. The sarcastic side of her personality doesn't come out unless someone is going on about something that she finds juvenile even at her young age.
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Post by TheWhiteWilSmith »

Well played.

Keep it up.
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