New comic, the Uncommons

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Is this a comic you would read?

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Falconire
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New comic, the Uncommons

Post by Falconire »

I'm starting my second comic called the Uncommons, a superhero murder mystery comic of sorts. I only have three pages done so far and it won't have a site until I get between 6-10 done so I actually have something to show but until then I'd like to get some feedback on what people think.

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i174/ ... comic1.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i174/ ... comic2.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i174/ ... comic3.jpg

edit/yeahduff/please mind the image restrictions. Feel free to repost after choosing one and fixing it.

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Post by Redtech »

Regardless of ANY opinions to be made, you need to have 20 comics in an archive to be able to have a fair apraisal. It's only fair to yourself in the long run, and also it's part of the rules of posting here.
Sometimes the failed experiments are the ones that don't try to kill you
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Post by Warofwinds »

You need to post in the Techniques, Tips and Tricks forum, pal^^ This forum is for pimpage only. Looks like you're off to a good start though! Solid composition and use of color, and an attention-grabbing type of beginning. I would say focus a little more on the anatomy of your characters. While you've chosen a cartoony style, a little more proportioning would make the art more attractive than it is. Also, eyes are crooked in panel panels. ;)
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