I'm starting my second comic called the Uncommons, a superhero murder mystery comic of sorts. I only have three pages done so far and it won't have a site until I get between 6-10 done so I actually have something to show but until then I'd like to get some feedback on what people think.
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i174/ ... comic1.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i174/ ... comic2.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i174/ ... comic3.jpg
edit/yeahduff/please mind the image restrictions. Feel free to repost after choosing one and fixing it.
New comic, the Uncommons
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You need to post in the Techniques, Tips and Tricks forum, pal^^ This forum is for pimpage only. Looks like you're off to a good start though! Solid composition and use of color, and an attention-grabbing type of beginning. I would say focus a little more on the anatomy of your characters. While you've chosen a cartoony style, a little more proportioning would make the art more attractive than it is. Also, eyes are crooked in panel panels. 



