Oh... well then how about me?fesworks wrote:@ Jackhass: I kinda stated in the first post that I am not accepting submission for reviews at this time. Sorry
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This evening, I got around to hearing a few of the reviews. I like your 60 second idea more and more. Though, as someone mentioned earlier, some of the reviews seem to have a little too much plot-summary, and not enough of your opinion expressed. The background music goes well with the cadence of the review, and you have a good voice for this sort of thing.
One suggestion that I might give: Speed up your pace. You hear those radio DJs when they list off the names of the artists that just had songs played? Or you know then they give weather forecasts? A DJ tends to speak a little faster than normal for two reasons: First, to fit more information into a small span of time, and Two, to keep the audience's attention. People can process words much faster than they can speak them. Talk too slow and your listeners will tend to zone out.
I'm not saying you should speed up to the point that you're tripping over yourself, either. But, you know.
I hope this helps.
One suggestion that I might give: Speed up your pace. You hear those radio DJs when they list off the names of the artists that just had songs played? Or you know then they give weather forecasts? A DJ tends to speak a little faster than normal for two reasons: First, to fit more information into a small span of time, and Two, to keep the audience's attention. People can process words much faster than they can speak them. Talk too slow and your listeners will tend to zone out.
I'm not saying you should speed up to the point that you're tripping over yourself, either. But, you know.
I hope this helps.
@ McDuffies: I really shouldn't at this point. (given that my submissions are closed). Not even sure if you have anything currently updating or matching mycritera. No offense.
@ orinocou: I've been trying to keep a description to within 50 words, but yea, I've noticed that too. Trying to work on cutting that.
@VinnieD: that's what I was thinking. I've seen too many reviews in which they bitch about the author or some aspect not even about the comic itself.
@ orinocou: I've been trying to keep a description to within 50 words, but yea, I've noticed that too. Trying to work on cutting that.
@VinnieD: that's what I was thinking. I've seen too many reviews in which they bitch about the author or some aspect not even about the comic itself.
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I find it safest to answer questions straight out when recieving them from people you do not quite know, especially their humor. The last thing I need is to piss people off .... more than I already domcDuffies wrote:You haven't caught I was joking, haven't you?
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indeed!NakedElf wrote:Humor is somewhat tricky to convey via text...
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Comics. Drawn poorly.
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It's grey, not gray. And it always has been.
Lauren's Wing - The fund for animal care
