The Uber Bean Returns.

Jin-roh · Post by **Jin-roh** » Sun Jan 07, 2007 5:36 pm

After a brief break once again for Christmas and such, the Uberbean is back. What's the current story? Clueless cute girl gets unwanted attention from voice-cracking nerdy guy online. She's to nice to blow him off. But she's quite annoyed.
http://theuberbean.comicgenesis.com

Megaskunjii · Post by **Megaskunjii** » Mon Jan 08, 2007 11:06 am

For myself, I know that when I post a pitch and get no comments I find it disheartening. I would appreciate negative comments over nothing at all, 'cause it meant that someone at least read it.

I can see that you've put real effort into the comic, but the storyline didn't grab me. I wish I could offer more constructive criticism, however the genre isn't my thing so really, I can't.

Jin-roh · Post by **Jin-roh** » Mon Jan 08, 2007 12:44 pm

megaskunjii wrote:For myself, I know that when I post a pitch and get no comments I find it disheartening. I would appreciate negative comments over nothing at all, 'cause it meant that someone at least read it.

I can see that you've put real effort into the comic, but the storyline didn't grab me. I wish I could offer more constructive criticism, however the genre isn't my thing so really, I can't.

Thanks. I've often been confused as to why my requests for criticism and such fall deaf ears.

What'd I'd appreciate is if you "defined" my genre and point to a few strips that illustrate it.

Megaskunjii · Post by **Megaskunjii** » Tue Jan 09, 2007 5:27 pm

It seems to be a "Slice of Life" genre. Basically because it's a reflection of someone's daily life. At least to me. Can't really point to any specific strips... it's sort of a "feeling".

Jin-roh · Post by **Jin-roh** » Wed Jan 10, 2007 2:06 pm

Okay. That's how I describe it.