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Kramerthebird
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Post by Kramerthebird »

Ok, I figure I have a big enough archive for people to base their comments off of, so here goes. Link is in my sig.
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MoulinSP85
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I read through your archives, and I think you're doing a pretty good job. The storyline is progressing and you haven't strayed at all from what's going on. So far, your characters are pretty good too. You haven't gone too far in character development, but you're still at the beginning. I didn't have trouble finding anything, and your site is pretty easy to navigate. Overall, you're doing great. Keep it up!
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Henshin
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Post by Henshin »

It has a nice Fujiko Fujio feel to it. Keep 'em coming.

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