Celidah,Celidah the Bardess wrote:Well, either it's not supposed to rhyme, or more likely, it's slant rhyme--basically similar, but not exact rhyme. I like slant rhyme. Yay for crazy-go-nuts poetic devices!Jaydub wrote: But the rhymes...oh dear....rhyming "trees" which ends with a "z" sound, with "peace" which ends with an "s" sound? And rhyming "heart" with "not"?
I believe Maxgoof wrote that after quoting me.