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new wallp image

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i'm making a new wallpaper around this image, but i wanted to know if there's something that needs fixing, or if there is a glaring wrongness about it (i'm bad at anatomy, and almost as bad at drawing female bodies)

done by hand, then put into photoshop
colored by layering photo filters
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Looks okay to me...her upper body and arms could maybe use a little work, but otherwise it's pretty good.
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I was to comment on the wallpaper itself, but you said it's not finished yet.

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the wallpaper background is going to be little more than two horizontal black bars, one at the top and bottom, and a colored space in between, with the figure on the right side
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scratch it, i realized that the arms and legs are in the wrong positions
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