Request for input on Character Design

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Khriskin
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Request for input on Character Design

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Coloring is -very- basic, I'm looking more for input on the clothing, overall appearance, and costume design. Be as brutal as you like, I'm here for the learning experience. And yes, please feel free to mock my guns? everyone else does. ^_~

http://www.martha.net/20030706a.jpg

One question, should I be translating the markings to the line drawing? I was working with some light line indicators before, but it just looked odd. I may go back to set-step grey-scaling if all else fails. :P

Thanks!
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