Oni Press Talent Search Entry

Starline · Post by **Starline** » Tue Jul 19, 2005 12:49 pm

Hey guys, I'm sending this out to the Oni Press Talent Search thing they have going on. I don't think my entry is spectacular or anything, but man, if I don't at least try its gonna bug me for a long time.

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Thought I would share and see what you guys think. Also, enter the contest if you all have time!! You never know what could happen!!

Warofwinds · Post by **Warofwinds** » Tue Jul 19, 2005 1:23 pm

*tear* *for real*

That was really good.

But I think there's a typo on the first page: "I don't know (how) Jake copes." I think...

Starline · Post by **Starline** » Tue Jul 19, 2005 1:31 pm

warofwinds wrote:*tear* *for real*

That was really good.

But I think there's a typo on the first page: "I don't know (how) Jake copes." I think...

thank you!! fixed!

Kris X · Post by **Kris X** » Tue Jul 19, 2005 2:06 pm

Love it. Absolutely love it.

RPin · Post by **RPin** » Tue Jul 19, 2005 2:35 pm

Oni Press is teh nice. If only I had time...

LibertyCabbage · Post by **LibertyCabbage** » Tue Jul 19, 2005 4:58 pm

that really was pretty pwnage

although i must know:

what does the X in your middle name stand for -_-;;

Starline · Post by **Starline** » Tue Jul 19, 2005 5:29 pm

LibertyCabbage wrote:that really was pretty pwnage

although i must know:

what does the X in your middle name stand for -_-;;

Xiomara

The Neko · Post by **The Neko** » Tue Jul 19, 2005 9:27 pm

I'd suggest working on background perspective. At one point, the sidewalk seems to be vertically stretching into the sky behind the characters, like a wall.

LibertyCabbage · Post by **LibertyCabbage** » Tue Jul 19, 2005 9:42 pm

Xiomara

wow

Starline · Post by **Starline** » Tue Jul 19, 2005 9:45 pm

LibertyCabbage wrote:
Xiomara
wow

My mom was strange. It means "Ready for Battle" in spanish apprently.

Psiogen · Post by **Psiogen** » Tue Jul 19, 2005 9:53 pm

*steals starline's middle name*

Nutcracker · Post by **Nutcracker** » Wed Jul 20, 2005 1:04 am

Wow, Starline, great work. I love it. Whenever you make more, be sure to show us.

Eunice_P · Post by **Eunice_P** » Wed Jul 20, 2005 1:22 am

Oni press? Hmm... now I feel like joining.

*looks at broken watch*

Damn... I have no time.

Bekka · Post by **Bekka** » Wed Jul 20, 2005 4:37 am

Good luck girl! But I read the comedy script that they provide and I didn't get the joke :| I don't think I could draw for any other genre either.