I would just like some constructive criticism

The_Dude · Post by **The_Dude** » Sun Mar 13, 2005 2:10 pm

I was just wondering if I could get some constructive criticism from some of the more experienced webcomic folk.

Comics name is Danger Music

Oualawouzou · Post by **Oualawouzou** » Sun Mar 13, 2005 3:44 pm

You should put this in "comic pitching" instead of "help center".

Cortland · Post by **Cortland** » Sun Mar 13, 2005 4:03 pm

Or better yet, in Technique Tips and Tricks. I think we usually like to have between ten and thirty strips before a pitch. Moderator! Can we let a lift, please?

I looked of your couple of strips, and I like them!

You seem to have the web comic format down pretty well, and your characters (in the limited space you've given them so far) seem to have an appropriate amount of banter. Artwise, I think your lines need to be a bit bolder. The anti-alias effect of a Photoshop paint bucket seems to be weakening them a great deal.

Until I see more strips, I'm afraid I can't say much more, but keep going!

Phalanx · Post by **Phalanx** » Sun Mar 13, 2005 4:23 pm

TTT it is, then. I'll move it.

And oi, cortland, Keencards...

Faub · Post by **Faub** » Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:42 am

Since you already have another thread with more and better posts. I'm just going to lock this one.