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Chibiartstudios
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OK, A couple of things.
1) Don't expect sprite comics to get a good reception. There are only 2 that I know of that are truly worth reading. One is the infamouse 8-Bit theater and the other is Kid Rad. And that one is animated. The rest tend to be an excuse to not put alot of work into the project while still trying to get readers.
2) You only have one comic up fron the looks of it. I couldn't find a back or previouse button anywhere. You should have 20-30 min before promoting like this. That way we have an idea of how the comics flow into each other (story based, gag-a-day etc.)
3) You need to not put your comic in a quote. You aren't quoting anyonne and it makes it so I have to cut and paste the link.
4) For a sprite comic it needs some work. The borders on the speach bubbles are too thin and are very pixelated, characters are a bit fuzzy. Since there is only one comic up I can't make a comment on comedy but I'll comment on that in a few months when you have enough up for review.
Remember, just because you make sprite comics that is no excuse not to make it your best work. I'll make a more in depth review after a month or so.
1) Don't expect sprite comics to get a good reception. There are only 2 that I know of that are truly worth reading. One is the infamouse 8-Bit theater and the other is Kid Rad. And that one is animated. The rest tend to be an excuse to not put alot of work into the project while still trying to get readers.
2) You only have one comic up fron the looks of it. I couldn't find a back or previouse button anywhere. You should have 20-30 min before promoting like this. That way we have an idea of how the comics flow into each other (story based, gag-a-day etc.)
3) You need to not put your comic in a quote. You aren't quoting anyonne and it makes it so I have to cut and paste the link.
4) For a sprite comic it needs some work. The borders on the speach bubbles are too thin and are very pixelated, characters are a bit fuzzy. Since there is only one comic up I can't make a comment on comedy but I'll comment on that in a few months when you have enough up for review.
Remember, just because you make sprite comics that is no excuse not to make it your best work. I'll make a more in depth review after a month or so.
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Nice comic. The background music at each page is very cool...and I like the sprites too. Did you dra them yourself? (Like th one w/ red hair). Of course, I wish yo had a little more comix so I knew what the crap is going on, and the spell that the wizard casts looks rather....not good.
Otherwise, I think it looks great, keep up the good work!
Nice comic. The background music at each page is very cool...and I like the sprites too. Did you dra them yourself? (Like th one w/ red hair). Of course, I wish yo had a little more comix so I knew what the crap is going on, and the spell that the wizard casts looks rather....not good.
Otherwise, I think it looks great, keep up the good work!
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