Hey, this is Roger of Class Mishaps, located at http://classmishaps.f2o.org. We've just passed the 26,000 hit mark and we've only been online for three months, so I figure I may as well promate at Keenspace.
It's a comic about guys at a film school with two artists alternating day-to-day. My comics are pretty. My partner's are not.
Check it out and give feedback, suckas.
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Alright, I'm noticing 22 people have viewed this thread already today and no responses! C'mon, people!
Oh, and when you actually head to the site, ignore our current comic for today. My partner in crime posted the dumbest comic in the world and I'd rather you all ignore his.
Lookin' for some critiques and feedback here...
Oh, and when you actually head to the site, ignore our current comic for today. My partner in crime posted the dumbest comic in the world and I'd rather you all ignore his.
Lookin' for some critiques and feedback here...
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Komiyan
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Ok, read it through. First off, congrats on the 26,000 hits 
Right, you said it yourself- your comics are pretty, his are not. And unfortunatly, they kinda mess up the continuaty of yours just a tad. They're a way different style and different humour, even, and it makes the whole product seem kinda jittery and a bit mashed together. I found myself pretty much just skipping his by the end to get to yours, cause I preferred the writing in those.. What you might wanna do is have both artist's strips on different pages, or in different archives, or something, so that they don't clash so much.
Sorry if I sound a bit harsh, there, I really don't mean to. I just think it might benefit you a lot.
As for the praise- I like the humour. It's kinda dark in places, which is always fun. The jokes that I enjoyed, I really enjoyed, so that was pretty awesome. Your art style seems like what would occur is Penny Arcade and Goats got combined, but it's not too much like either one of those. This is cool.
Keep it up, please. It's good work, it just needs a little refining, which pretty much every comic does, to be fair.
Right, you said it yourself- your comics are pretty, his are not. And unfortunatly, they kinda mess up the continuaty of yours just a tad. They're a way different style and different humour, even, and it makes the whole product seem kinda jittery and a bit mashed together. I found myself pretty much just skipping his by the end to get to yours, cause I preferred the writing in those.. What you might wanna do is have both artist's strips on different pages, or in different archives, or something, so that they don't clash so much.
Sorry if I sound a bit harsh, there, I really don't mean to. I just think it might benefit you a lot.
As for the praise- I like the humour. It's kinda dark in places, which is always fun. The jokes that I enjoyed, I really enjoyed, so that was pretty awesome. Your art style seems like what would occur is Penny Arcade and Goats got combined, but it's not too much like either one of those. This is cool.
Keep it up, please. It's good work, it just needs a little refining, which pretty much every comic does, to be fair.
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Heheh, yeah....
Thanks for the feedback. If anyone else has anything I'd be more than excited to hear it.
I agree, lately I've been getting some complaints about my partner's art and writing, especially after that last comic that couldn't pass for a geometry lesson.
Thanks for the compliment on the art and writing. As for the 26,000 hits, we broke 30,000 right before the month ended. I credit it mostly to what Chuck calls "the Blogosphere" or something like that. Basically, we're getting linked to by tons of websites like http://www.imao.us and http://www.badexample.mu.nu. It's insane.
Seriously, though, if anyone else has feedback to offer, I'm more than willing to listen.
I agree, lately I've been getting some complaints about my partner's art and writing, especially after that last comic that couldn't pass for a geometry lesson.
Thanks for the compliment on the art and writing. As for the 26,000 hits, we broke 30,000 right before the month ended. I credit it mostly to what Chuck calls "the Blogosphere" or something like that. Basically, we're getting linked to by tons of websites like http://www.imao.us and http://www.badexample.mu.nu. It's insane.
Seriously, though, if anyone else has feedback to offer, I'm more than willing to listen.
Hi Roger,
I was checkin out some fo your comics and was digging your artwork. You definitely have a firm grasp of the cartooning angle and style. I wish I could have read more, but it was loading slowly and I am still at work. Doh!
I also like your scroll box commentary. I wanted to set up something like that on my site as well so my brother and his friends can leave me some comments. would you mind telling we where you got the code for that? Or you mind if I check out your scripting for some ideas?
Keep up the cool work!
I was checkin out some fo your comics and was digging your artwork. You definitely have a firm grasp of the cartooning angle and style. I wish I could have read more, but it was loading slowly and I am still at work. Doh!
I also like your scroll box commentary. I wanted to set up something like that on my site as well so my brother and his friends can leave me some comments. would you mind telling we where you got the code for that? Or you mind if I check out your scripting for some ideas?
Keep up the cool work!
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