Attention! New Comic!!
<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Breakpoint City:
<B>It's a sci-fi comic about superheroes and future technology; </B><HR></BLOCKQUOTE><P>So howcome you're on cleanspace but not the sci-fi and superhero dropdowns?<P>It's all about getting found, friend. Looks good, by the way.<P>------------------
Scott Maddix
<A HREF="http://PDI.keenspace.com" TARGET=_blank>Psychic Dyslexia Institute:</A>
Where we all have <I>special</I> special powers
(And what does "Fire on the Mountain" <I>mean</I>, anyway?)
<B>It's a sci-fi comic about superheroes and future technology; </B><HR></BLOCKQUOTE><P>So howcome you're on cleanspace but not the sci-fi and superhero dropdowns?<P>It's all about getting found, friend. Looks good, by the way.<P>------------------
Scott Maddix
<A HREF="http://PDI.keenspace.com" TARGET=_blank>Psychic Dyslexia Institute:</A>
Where we all have <I>special</I> special powers
(And what does "Fire on the Mountain" <I>mean</I>, anyway?)
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Andy Reade
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Looks good to me.
Unfortunately, finding an audience can take alot of time and patience.
Take a look at the really successful comic sites & see which link exchange & index sites they're listed on.
Personally, I don't mind black & white comics, (mine is).
Though, I read alot of underground stuff, so I'm more used to them, perhaps.
I'm not that knowledgeable when it comes to image optimisation, but I notice you use "interlaced" or "progressive" gifs for your comics & I'm pretty sure that they tend to have larger file sizes.
Anyway, good stuff mate.<P>------------------
'Nova Machine' the web-comic;
<A HREF="http://postinfinity.keenspace.com" TARGET=_blank>postinfinity.keenspace.com</A>
Unfortunately, finding an audience can take alot of time and patience.
Take a look at the really successful comic sites & see which link exchange & index sites they're listed on.
Personally, I don't mind black & white comics, (mine is).
Though, I read alot of underground stuff, so I'm more used to them, perhaps.
I'm not that knowledgeable when it comes to image optimisation, but I notice you use "interlaced" or "progressive" gifs for your comics & I'm pretty sure that they tend to have larger file sizes.
Anyway, good stuff mate.<P>------------------
'Nova Machine' the web-comic;
<A HREF="http://postinfinity.keenspace.com" TARGET=_blank>postinfinity.keenspace.com</A>
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Andy Reade
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Looks good to me.
Unfortunately, finding an audience can take alot of time and patience.
Take a look at the really successful comic sites & see which link exchange & index sites they're listed on.
Personally, I don't mind black & white comics, (mine is).
Though, I read alot of underground stuff, so I'm more used to them, perhaps.
I'm not that knowledgeable when it comes to image optimisation, but I notice you use "interlaced" or "progressive" gifs for your comics & I'm pretty sure that they tend to have larger file sizes.
Anyway, good stuff mate.<P>------------------
'Nova Machine' the web-comic;
<A HREF="http://postinfinity.keenspace.com" TARGET=_blank>postinfinity.keenspace.com</A>
Unfortunately, finding an audience can take alot of time and patience.
Take a look at the really successful comic sites & see which link exchange & index sites they're listed on.
Personally, I don't mind black & white comics, (mine is).
Though, I read alot of underground stuff, so I'm more used to them, perhaps.
I'm not that knowledgeable when it comes to image optimisation, but I notice you use "interlaced" or "progressive" gifs for your comics & I'm pretty sure that they tend to have larger file sizes.
Anyway, good stuff mate.<P>------------------
'Nova Machine' the web-comic;
<A HREF="http://postinfinity.keenspace.com" TARGET=_blank>postinfinity.keenspace.com</A>
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Andy Reade
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Darn, sorry.
Looks like the board decided to post my message three times for some reason, don't know how that happened!<P>------------------
'Nova Machine' the web-comic;
<A HREF="http://postinfinity.keenspace.com" TARGET=_blank>postinfinity.keenspace.com</A><p>[This message has been edited by Andy Reade (edited 02-11-2001).]
Looks like the board decided to post my message three times for some reason, don't know how that happened!<P>------------------
'Nova Machine' the web-comic;
<A HREF="http://postinfinity.keenspace.com" TARGET=_blank>postinfinity.keenspace.com</A><p>[This message has been edited by Andy Reade (edited 02-11-2001).]
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Gravity
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What a great comic! I mean it!-- I see alot of similarity in our gag-thinking. I see my strip, GRAVITY as more of a futuristic strip then a "Sci-fi" strip. It would be cool to line up a crossover or something down the line.- I'll add a link to your site on my main page. <P>YOu should have e-mailed me to let me know you were around sooner! It's hard to keep a handle on all the strips that come around, and hide on the net. <P>------------------
D.J. Coffman
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D.J. Coffman
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Breakpoint City
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WOW! Thanks for the response! Here's what I have to say:
First off, the reason the old comics were submitted in such a bizzare way was because back then, I really didn't carew about commiting to a schedule. I just uploaded whenever. Now, things have changed. I have to keep to a schedule becuase this is part of my Senior project; thus meaning I have to update every week. I've been experimenting latley with days of the week, and it seems that I can commit to making a new comic and have it up by Saturday. So I now am consistant: Updates every week on Saturdays, Saturday afternoon if I'm late <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif">
The reason BPC isn't in color is because; well, I'm lazy. But really, I don't have a lot of time to work on my comic, and adding color can take up at least an extra hour. I need my sleep, man! Okay, so I'm lazy, but I can see color happening in the future.
I'm a big fan of Gravity ever since I discovered it last month, and I guess I'm just as guilty for not sending some feedback. It's an awesome strip; I can really see it going places within the next year. D.J. certainly has the same twisted sense of humor I do. I kinda agree with with you, D.J., Sci-Fi seems to fit your comic better than "future". I'm not too happy with being labeled a "superhero" strip, because I have more good plot ideas that don't have anything to do with people in tights and capes. Anyway, I'd love to do some type of cross-over or something with Gravity; drop me a line at breakpointcity@hotmail.com and we can talk <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif">
Thanks for the help, guys! Keep posting your thoughts! I love the attention (who doesn't?)
-Brian
First off, the reason the old comics were submitted in such a bizzare way was because back then, I really didn't carew about commiting to a schedule. I just uploaded whenever. Now, things have changed. I have to keep to a schedule becuase this is part of my Senior project; thus meaning I have to update every week. I've been experimenting latley with days of the week, and it seems that I can commit to making a new comic and have it up by Saturday. So I now am consistant: Updates every week on Saturdays, Saturday afternoon if I'm late <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif">
The reason BPC isn't in color is because; well, I'm lazy. But really, I don't have a lot of time to work on my comic, and adding color can take up at least an extra hour. I need my sleep, man! Okay, so I'm lazy, but I can see color happening in the future.
I'm a big fan of Gravity ever since I discovered it last month, and I guess I'm just as guilty for not sending some feedback. It's an awesome strip; I can really see it going places within the next year. D.J. certainly has the same twisted sense of humor I do. I kinda agree with with you, D.J., Sci-Fi seems to fit your comic better than "future". I'm not too happy with being labeled a "superhero" strip, because I have more good plot ideas that don't have anything to do with people in tights and capes. Anyway, I'd love to do some type of cross-over or something with Gravity; drop me a line at breakpointcity@hotmail.com and we can talk <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif">
Thanks for the help, guys! Keep posting your thoughts! I love the attention (who doesn't?)
-Brian
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Breakpoint City
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Okay, I've sunk this low. After joining a dropdown, Big Panda, and even doing a Mellonpool cameo, I still have no readers and no feedback. So, I plead to the Keen public, PLEASE take a look at my site! It's a sci-fi comic about superheroes and future technology; basically Futurama meets Freakazoid, but with my own unique twists. All I ask of you is to take a look at our archives and send me some feedback. Thanks for your support!
-Brian Emling, who feels pathetic begging for hits. <A HREF="http://breakpointcity.keenspace.com/" TARGET=_blank>http://breakpointcity.keenspace.com/</A>
-Brian Emling, who feels pathetic begging for hits. <A HREF="http://breakpointcity.keenspace.com/" TARGET=_blank>http://breakpointcity.keenspace.com/</A>
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Hey, I went to your site. The layout is great, and the comic is funny. I have a few bits of advice, not that I am in such a position to dole it out, but you did ask for some feedback, so I will give you my ideas to help out the comic. <P>1) Update more often. The comics don't appear to follow any pattern in being updated. You have some spots where you don't update for over a full week, then another week you put up three. If you want readers to get hooked, and invest their time into your comic, I think consistency is key. Find a schedule you can live with, even if it is only three times a week, but stick to it, so people know that if they go there on a particular day, they will see a comic. Rather than go there day after day, only to see that there was no update. <P>2) Purely a matter of preference, but I think the comic would look better in color. Seeing as you don't do a daily, it shouldn't be that much of a time investment. Of course, thats just my preference, and maybe not everyone feels that way.<P>
In closing, the site looks great, and I would not guess that you don't have any readers. I doubt that you have zero readers! The site has a nice professional look to it, and I think with a bit more consistency or just getting your name out there, you will pick up lots of readers! <P>Good Luck,<P>~dave
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In closing, the site looks great, and I would not guess that you don't have any readers. I doubt that you have zero readers! The site has a nice professional look to it, and I think with a bit more consistency or just getting your name out there, you will pick up lots of readers! <P>Good Luck,<P>~dave
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<A HREF="http://toddandpenguin.keenspace.com/" TARGET=_blank>http://toddandpenguin.keenspace.com/</A>
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Matt Wilson
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Wow. Weird..some of your characters look eerily like some of my characters. Neatee!<P>-----------
Matt Wilson
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Matt Wilson
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Breakpoint City
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Sweet muffins, he's right! This is way too weird. Your comic looks EXACTLY like how I draw my comic. Are you sure we aren't the same person? Did I ever accidentally quantum leap into you? Hmmmm...<P>-Brian Emling, who is NOT Matt Wilson. Nope. <A HREF="http://breakpointcity.keenspace.com/" TARGET=_blank>http://breakpointcity.keenspace.com/</A>
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Matt Wilson
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Well, mine aren't human, like yours. Personally, I have always wanted to see SOMEONE draw the way I did. These days, a lot of strips have a similar look to other strips. But mine didn't really look like anything else(a little like Rayman, just a tad).<P>Perhaps April 1st is not out of the question for me after all. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif">
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Very nice. I'm definately going to start reading. You should be on the Scifi dropdown.<P>Mark Mekkes<P>------------------
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