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Haha! Did the test with some WBK characters. That was fun! :D

Vandi got a 9, Dores a 4 and Elia a 10. Ian got a 5. That's low... :-? But these are just my answers. If my better half (who did the larger part of thinking the characters out) would do the test, the score might be a little different...

I think that it's a characters flaws that defines her or him. Flaws are much more important than the good points, imho. Makes a character interesting.

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my "alex domoni" char from my webcomic got a 116 score on the mary sue test...

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Universal test:
Remmil - 9
Oc - 24

But many things I checked because I was being ironic at some point... I mean, it's funny that Oc gets all the girls and Remmil gets none, hehehe

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Biggest sin ever, in comics, novels and movies, is having a character that can do no wrong. For example, this book I read once when I was sick- called Jude's Law- is the epitome of just that. Jude (an actor/boxer who was perfect in every way) had fallen for May, an overweight but pretty, quiet museum curator. She was all shy and "Oh, how can you possibly like a fat girl like me, you suave, sexy hink" and he was all "You're so beautiful to me" and it made me puke. He bought her clothes (they were perfectly in styule, they fit perfectly, they flattered her perfectly AND he was rich so he could afford it), he helped her deadbeat brother out of a jam with the mob (by using his l33t fighting skills, oh the manliness), he loved her unconditionally and was always faithful. The one fight they had? Because he kept saying she was beautiful and she didn't believe him so he got mad.

THE MAN COULD DO NO WRONG! So to me, in any kind of literature, having the perfect (or even perfectly flawed) character trumps all updating, art, storyline or author-induced mornic-ness.
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I just took the universal test, Namu scored an 11. There are some issues that I wasn't 100% if applied but I feel better that I'm in the clear.

My character does not preach for me. :lol:

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webkilla wrote: - irregular updates (the bane of all update deadlines)
I see this as masturbation. If it is a sin, it's one most people are willing to live with.

I took the original fiction test for the Head Doctor.

Your Mary Sue Score: 7

0-10 points: The Anti-Sue. Your character is the very antithesis of a Mary-Sue. Why are you even taking this test?

If I had taken it for Merv, it probably would have been a bit higher because of all the magic stuff.
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...I was kinda bored so I decided to take the Mary Sue test...

...using my life so far as the character's story...

...I got a score of 90...


...either I need a better writer for my life or I've got a very selective memory...


...or I'm just a big Mary Sue...

(...might explain the 'dog' incident...) :)
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I hadn't realized there was more than one test.

Miriam scored a 2 on the Original Fiction test.

I don't think this test works as well for an open-ended comic strip like mine, though; I don't have an ending so all the questions about how the story ends up weren't applicable.

Still. 2.
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Whoot, Scored a 1 on the original test... I guess im not as self absorbed as I thought with the lead..

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Haha, -4 on the original test, 22 on the Mary Sue test. Komiyan is too sucky to be a real Mary Sue.
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rcmonroe wrote:I hadn't realized there was more than one test.

Miriam scored a 2 on the Original Fiction test.

I don't think this test works as well for an open-ended comic strip like mine, though; I don't have an ending so all the questions about how the story ends up weren't applicable.

Still. 2.
How'd John do? Based on the criteria from the test, I imagine he would score higher. While I don't think he really qualifies as a Mary-Sue, he has so many positive traits that the test would be liable to think so. (What with Miriam is sharing a flat with Jesus/Buddha and all ;-) )

Which raises a question in my mind. I never thought of Mary-Sues as being only the main protagonist, but is that part of the definition? I think the definition might be little difficult to use effectively. It's probably one those things where you can only say "I know it when I see it."
Komiyan wrote:Haha, -4 on the original test, 22 on the Mary Sue test. Komiyan is too sucky to be a real Mary Sue.
Since your other characters have the unusual genesis of being originally created individually by different people, would you describe any of the others as Mary-Sues of the original players? It isn't totally fair, since there is an element of wish-fulfilment in RPing to begin with, but were any of them really obvious?
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Renard wrote:
Komiyan wrote:Haha, -4 on the original test, 22 on the Mary Sue test. Komiyan is too sucky to be a real Mary Sue.
Since your other characters have the unusual genesis of being originally created individually by different people, would you describe any of the others as Mary-Sues of the original players? It isn't totally fair, since there is an element of wish-fulfilment in RPing to begin with, but were any of them really obvious?
Not massively. That's not what seasoned (or at least sensible) RPers do, you don't think 'I'm gonna make me but awesome in every way!'. The rules restrict godmodding, and everyone in that game at least just came up with a good concept and played it.

Except maybe Casper, he's pretty much his player through and through, but can use a sword and a bit more on the evil side. I swear he could sneak attack with a thrown mint humbug.

Also, nice to see you about again :)
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Renard wrote:How'd John do? Based on the criteria from the test, I imagine he would score higher. While I don't think he really qualifies as a Mary-Sue, he has so many positive traits that the test would be liable to think so. (What with Miriam is sharing a flat with Jesus/Buddha and all ;-) )
John was a 14 on the Universal test, but a 24 on the Original Fiction test. So one test sees him as a Mary Sue, and other doesn't.

Actually, I expected him to be a huge MS on both tests. I pretty much think he's a Mary Sue. Not because he's like me at all (I'm a lot more like Miriam) but because he's so Jesus-y/Buddha-y.

He is a challenging character to write, because it's hard to make someone "good" seem "real." I honestly never know if I'm pulling it off.
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rcmonroe wrote:Actually, I expected him to be a huge MS on both tests. I pretty much think he's a Mary Sue. Not because he's like me at all (I'm a lot more like Miriam) but because he's so Jesus-y/Buddha-y.

He is a challenging character to write, because it's hard to make someone "good" seem "real." I honestly never know if I'm pulling it off.
I actually knew a young man much like John. I tried to build a religion around him, unfortunately he'd have none of it. I think the key is to keep as you're going with him--he's not preaching, he's not immune to a little sarcasm, he's not trying to save anyone, or actively showing them the error of their ways--and you'll be fine.
Komiyan wrote:Not massively. That's not what seasoned (or at least sensible) RPers do, you don't think 'I'm gonna make me but awesome in every way!'. The rules restrict godmodding, and everyone in that game at least just came up with a good concept and played it.


I wasn't sure if it was from an earlier session or once you've been well-established as players. Thinking back to the earliest days of playing, I can remember some serious Mary-Sue'ing (and by no means will I be claiming that I was immune). I'm torn between fondness and wishes to block them out.
Komiyan wrote:Also, nice to see you about again :)
Thanks. :) I'm often lurking the forum. I just find that in most threads I have very little that I feel would add value to any given thread.
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*claps hands* All of my characters scored under 40, and most under 20. *sigh of relief* That had me worried, thought I was gonna end up with a whole bunch of MSs. Bad enough the style is MS, didn't need the characters to be as such to.
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Forgive me....somebody, for I have sinned.

I've never been able to say I've actually commited every crime in the book before.
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rcmonroe wrote:He is a challenging character to write, because it's hard to make someone "good" seem "real." I honestly never know if I'm pulling it off.
You're pulling it off. I spent last night reading through your entire archive. You're completely pulling it off.

(I have a similar problem with Casey, though his "goodness" actually makes many of my characters think he may be Satan. For some reason.)
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Kemmy wrote:
rcmonroe wrote:He is a challenging character to write, because it's hard to make someone "good" seem "real." I honestly never know if I'm pulling it off.
You're pulling it off. I spent last night reading through your entire archive. You're completely pulling it off.

(I have a similar problem with Casey, though his "goodness" actually makes many of my characters think he may be Satan. For some reason.)
Now you've got me intrigued. I'm adding you to the Big List of Comics I'll Read When I Get a Chance.
Renard wrote:Thanks. I'm often lurking the forum. I just find that in most threads I have very little that I feel would add value to any given thread.
That doesn't seem to deter most of us.
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Post by Robbie »

I'm going to add "bad April Fool's jokes."

Good April Fool's jokes are one thing, but bad ones....

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I wanted to do a terrible April Fools joke this year, but I ran out of time. :(
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