YarpsDat wrote:The thing with warriors caste walking around naked bothers me somewhat.
They certainly wouldn't go around being naked when in combat. But there are times when they're off-duty, retired, sleeping, bathing, rise up in ranks to a more administrative role. No, I'm not planning on having them fight in the nude (at least, not except in their most primitive state of civilization).
YarpsDat wrote:I'm not sure what's the technology level of the planet in question.
I've got a rough outline from a few proto-rhino forms, up until space faring.
YarpsDat wrote:The horns in way of sight look somewhat annoying.
I agree. I'd like to have them be horned, I just can't think of a good place to give them horns.
blackaby wrote:The horns aren't really a practical weapon for a biped, I think they'd be more of a hindrance than anything.
Unfortunately your probably right.
YarpsDat wrote:You might want to design a skeleton for that species, design it to work with thumbs, face-horns and the tail-mace. That will give these features more realistic form and function.
That might be a good idea. Although I don't know that much about biology, so I don't know if it would be that much better, but it can't hurt to try.
Interesting site, I've had a quick look, I'll give it a bit more of a look at another time. Thanks
Darzoni wrote:Typically the adaptations you list, and the appearance given, would indicate defensive adaptations by herbivores to fend off predators (tough skin, horns, club-tail). While the herd instinct could develop and constitute sentience, I don't see them being overly aggressive except when defending the herd.
I see your point (and I've heard it in plenty of times), but I've never seen proof either way (given that humans are our only example of our level of intelligence, we don't have much to draw from).
I believe that intelligence (once it reaches a particular level), override any instinctual tendencies in a species.
One of our closest relatives (and closest to our level and type of intelligence) are gorillas, and even between "subspecies" of gorrillas,
behaviour can be quite different, with one group aggressive towards non-tribe members, and another different when meeting another tribe whose leader is a relation. Another close realtive is the orangutan who has the exact same diet as Gorrillas,
but are extremely solitary. Bonobo's have a similar diet to Gorillas and Orangutans, but
have an egalitarian society. Chimpanzee's on the other hand (which are the closest relations for Bonobo's and humans), have a structure much more like Gorilla's and are in fact
more omnivorous then any other living hominid (minus humans.
The only conclusion I can base on that is, once intelligence comes into play at a high enough level whether a creature is a herbivore, omnivore, carnivor it really doesn't matter. In all the above examples, they're all omnivores, but most of them have a herbivore diet, but even if you class them as omnivores, their societies are quite different. And their intelligence level isn't at the human level. Their intelligence is lower, so their natural instincts can come into play more.
Sorry, pet peeve of mine having all alien carnivores be aggressive, while herbivores are always placid. Humans have a wide range of demeanours (which I don't think is because of our diet, but instead our intelligence), I figure why can't non-omnivores of equal intelligence as well.
Black Sparrow wrote:Anyway, I'm kind of disappointed that, in a species that is designed like a rhino or similarly hoofed mammal, you felt the need to add two very humanesque breasts.

I was really, really unsure about that. I did think of having a set up more like a dog, but I thought only creatures that give birth in litters have such a set up. So I went for the humanesque breasts, not very happy with it. I've attached an alternate breast style for the creature down below.
Black Sparrow wrote:the eyes should be on the side of the head. Frontal vision and depth perception are generally carnivorous traits.
Thanks, I didn't realise that. See below for an updated appearance.
Black Sparrow wrote:Which is another thing that bugs me... this is a "super race."
Not really. The tail (even if used as a club) would be useless against any armor (especially metal), as would the claws. I'm not too sure about horns, but I think they wouldn't be the most useful thing either. Also something that I can't depict in the picture (I don't know how) is their hands don't have 3 joints (like humans), they have two. This is going to make it difficult for them to wield fine-precision items, and it's always going to require extra care in creating tools for them.
Black Sparrow wrote:The club tail seems awkward... You'd think it'd drag on the ground when she walked. And, as a biped, she wouldn't get much force behind the club anyway, since she has no forepaws for leverage.
Thankyou. I was a bit unsure about that. I thought perhaps it would drag on the floor, but I thought that might make walking too difficult (it didn't occur to me that this would make it easier to keep balanced). I've updated my info so the tail isn't used in combat (I couldn't work out how to get much force behind it).
RemusShepherd wrote:I doubt you want to draw that, so consider another type of mammary gland, like maybe the exposed glands of some marsupials -- just large pores in the skin. It would be no more than a dot on a muscular chest in your drawing. Look up 'platypus milk glands' for details.
Err.. I've been unable to find any pictures of that. Do you have any?
RemusShepherd wrote:I can't see this race, evolving on its own, having much of a nudity taboo.
Neither can I unfortunately. Another problem as well as drawing females naked, is having to draw males naked. Are the genitals on rhino's exposed? I can't see any in the pictures I've seen, but would a bipedal's become exposed anyway?
RemusShepherd wrote:One, rhino feet flare out slightly, to distribute weight over a wider area and reduce wear on the footpad. A biped's feet would need to flare out even more to reduce foot pressure more, and might look more like inverted mushrooms than the columns in your drawing. You could dismiss this by saying their skin and joints are so tough they can stand up to any amount of wear.
How do you show that at the angle of the picture though?
RemusShepherd wrote:Note that pachyderms like rhinos and elephants cannot jump, and have limited mobility in their feet, so your creature is not going to be leaping around and performing fancy footwork in combat. It's going to stand there, absorb hits, and knock anything that comes near it into next week. I guess what I'm saying is, don't make them ninjas.

Oooh, lucky I found that out. What are some fighting styles you would recommend for such a creature? Are there any? Sure in the early days there won't be much sophistication, but over time a warrior caste will develop fighting styles and techniques which go beyond "this is the pointy end. This is the end you shove into people."
blackaby wrote:In fact looking at it more and more, I think this race would be very prone to dropping on all fours when it fought & I'm not sure if this was what you were going for.
Yeah, no that's another species. I had the same thought myself looking at this creature, but swords and guns don't work well when you're on all fours
Thanks for all the feedback everyone

Greatly appreciated, and please, keep it coming.