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by ShineDog » Wed Mar 30, 2005 9:32 pm
oh contempt!
CONTEMPT!!!
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by Isukiyomi » Wed Mar 30, 2005 11:57 pm
Took me a bit...but here it is ^_^;;
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by Humbug » Thu Mar 31, 2005 4:49 am
Okie dokie, here's my lineart.
I didn't draw in the special effects coz I wanted to do it separately, so do what you think looks best.
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by Phalanx » Thu Mar 31, 2005 8:20 am
Humbug wrote: Okie dokie, here's my lineart.
I didn't draw in the special effects coz I wanted to do it separately, so do what you think looks best.
Can I say: "Wow?!"
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by Sput » Thu Mar 31, 2005 8:30 am
Humbug: homg magically delicious foreshortening. I spelled that wrong because I am in a daze. Yum.
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by Ryuko » Thu Mar 31, 2005 10:51 am
I want to ink that. Also: sex it.
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by Magius del Cotto » Fri Apr 01, 2005 7:43 pm
Here's my take on yours, Humbug. Enjoy, all!
Did the harp girl too...
(I can pump these out 1/2-1 1/2 hour each!)
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by LAGtheNoggin » Sat Apr 02, 2005 6:44 pm
I would contribute but, uhm,
COLOURING TAKES TOO MUCH TIME >.<
This silly little 300 X 300 avatar-esque thing took three hours
to colour . Thinking how long a complicated image like the ones posted here makes me tremble in cold and sticky fear O.o
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by Humbug » Sat Apr 02, 2005 6:53 pm
Nice. ^^ I enjoying seeing other people's take on my work. And thats a cool avatar Lag.
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by Starline » Sat Apr 02, 2005 8:12 pm
Phalanx wrote: Humbug wrote: Okie dokie, here's my lineart.
I didn't draw in the special effects coz I wanted to do it separately, so do what you think looks best.
Can I say: "Wow?!"
Ditto.
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by Starline » Sat Apr 02, 2005 8:15 pm
This was one of my submissions for the Space Bikeeni event. If anyone wants to take a stab at it.
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by Simbrie » Sat Apr 02, 2005 10:27 pm
Here's my take on Humbug's lineart (which is awesome).
I kinda rushed it half way through. I'm suppose to be packing. ^^
SO that's why the cloth and everything but the skin is shoddy. Woo! Took me about...4 hours.
I'm very happy how it came out, though. Humbug, do you mind me putting it in my gallery? Your lineart will be credited to you, of course.[/img]
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by Humbug » Sun Apr 03, 2005 4:02 am
I don't mind at all. Nice attention to the lighting.
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by Simbrie » Sun Apr 03, 2005 4:51 am
THanks. =D
I'm still working on lighting and rendering, but this is the best I've done so far.
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Joel Fagin
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by Joel Fagin » Sun Apr 03, 2005 5:29 am
I didn't bother with much care on the chair. It's a little... uh... weird.
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by Simbrie » Sun Apr 03, 2005 5:43 am
Eh, nearly forgot. I wanted to put something up to be colored too. =p
It's not as clean as other people's, I just want to see what other people's takes on it are.
It's also anthro, so if you don't like the stuff...
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by Levi-chan » Sun Apr 03, 2005 4:47 pm
Stephen Henderson-Grady wrote: Okay, this took awhile and it still doesn't look quite finished. Some nice stuff going on, though.
Holy-mother-of-god. How did you do that?! That is so awesome..
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by Sput » Sun Apr 03, 2005 8:48 pm
Working onnn....
Not done ;_;!!
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