My Daily Comic

Van Douchebag · Post by **Van Douchebag** » Thu Feb 17, 2005 11:01 pm

PrincessJen wrote:Its satire, can't you tell the Triangle is the stereotypical average person, curseing, quick to judge, angry at everything, very patriotic? Or that the square is a classic closet homosexual? Come on boys its dick jokes with substance.

It's terrible satire. Get that through your head.

Yeahduff · Post by **Yeahduff** » Fri Feb 18, 2005 1:22 am

Can we keep everything respectful around here please?

If you don't like it, say so. But don't be a jagoff.

Kris X · Post by **Kris X** » Fri Feb 18, 2005 7:53 am

Just to help you out, I think you misunderstand the meaning of a satire. A satire is a witty parody on political or daily things that eventually appear ironic. Ironic in the sense that it is so true and that it carries an underlying message...

This is something you need to know, you need to know this is not witty intellectual musings. People could be and are turned off by you excessive cusing and jokes that only make sense when your high or a "gansta." FYI, a majority of the audience you are trying to reach won't read your comic anyway because their busy looking at porn sites. That said, try making your humor more than just cussing.

You have a good technic with flash and I'd hate to see it go to waste. Try jokes that don't cuss 24-7. If you want to play on the satire, realize that one comic is enough of the cussing joke. Maybe try something different.

LibertyCabbage · Post by **LibertyCabbage** » Fri Feb 18, 2005 9:02 am

first step is draw people or animals because shapes are just boring as hell.

Oualawouzou · Post by **Oualawouzou** » Fri Feb 18, 2005 9:05 am

LibertyCabbage wrote:first step is draw people or animals because shapes are just boring as hell.

People/animals do not guarantee interesting characters. I'll take an interesting shape over a boring human/animal any day.

Thirdworldvillian · Post by **Thirdworldvillian** » Fri Feb 18, 2005 9:10 am

People are just shapes formed into people...

Wow this is pretty harsh, deserving, but harsh. But seriously, dont try and tell us that this has some sort of deeper meaning -- cause even if it does, it is expressed in such a way that it ruins all viewing pleasure. In other words I dont really like it.

Oh and the flash work is so-so, but your practicing and thats whats inportant.

PrincessJen · Post by **PrincessJen** » Fri Feb 18, 2005 4:23 pm

Why are you all so mean and judgemental!

ShineDog · Post by **ShineDog** » Fri Feb 18, 2005 6:00 pm

we're just honest.

regarding shapes, theyve been done before, and better, triangle and robert had BAGS of character.

Kris X · Post by **Kris X** » Fri Feb 18, 2005 8:52 pm

PrincessJen wrote:Why are you all so mean and judgemental!

Some of us are mean, some of us just want to help. Take this as advice and not bashing, we do mean well... I think.

Yeahduff · Post by **Yeahduff** » Sat Feb 19, 2005 1:11 am

ShineDog wrote:we're just honest..

I can be honest by using a buncha cuss words to describe your critique style, but instead I'd kindly ask you say something meaningful rather than hurtful, whether you like the work or not.

Derenge · Post by **Derenge** » Sat Feb 19, 2005 6:30 pm

Just so eveyone knows I'm quite sure that "princessjen" is a person who otherwise goes under the name "MaRiNe1". On buzzcomix a while ago they caused some trouble.

Honestly there is not any real reason for people to have lashed out from the get-go other than perhaps finding offence in your comic. The main trouble is that you seem surprised at this even though what you create clearly stirkes an annoying cord with some. I know you aim often to create annoyances and discord in online communites a look at your website will show anyone this. " Remember how I said keenspace was bad people? wham bad people in action. Heck, they don't even like cloneroids which I put up two new pages up yesterday." What else could this be there for other than to try and start conflict?

I just hope that the people around here have enough sense in the future to avoid any sort of altercation that you may be looking for. No good can come from being stupid an mean to one another so come on people, no need to be asses to one another.

PrincessJen · Post by **PrincessJen** » Fri Feb 25, 2005 12:54 pm

anyone else got anything to say?

Monty · Post by **Monty** » Fri Feb 25, 2005 1:01 pm

This comic is unbelievable. It moved me here...it moved me there...it moved me down and to the right a little, yeah thats good...oh yeah. I read the whole archive and am really touched a little, it made me rethink my lifes plans...honestly. Now I'm not so sure about wanting to become a veternarian.

Thirdworldvillian · Post by **Thirdworldvillian** » Fri Feb 25, 2005 4:44 pm

hehe its deleted now.....I think we broke her feelings....

Post by **Mercury Hat** » Fri Feb 25, 2005 5:05 pm

thirdworldvillian wrote:hehe its deleted now.....I think we broke her feelings....

Drunkduck is having one of their unscheduled frequent downtimes, I think.

PrincessJen · Post by **PrincessJen** » Fri Feb 25, 2005 6:59 pm

Didn't keenspace go off for a whole month and erase everyones stuff once? Maybe it was twice...

Post by **Mercury Hat** » Fri Feb 25, 2005 7:53 pm

If it did it was years ago. The last serious downtime I remember was back in February or late January of 2004, but I've only been here for a little over a year.

Sketch286 · Post by **Sketch286** » Fri Feb 25, 2005 7:54 pm

not that I can remember, but then again I don't think I've been reading Keen comics for all that long compared to how long it's been here.

Warren · Post by **Warren** » Fri Feb 25, 2005 8:15 pm

PrincessJen wrote:Didn't keenspace go off for a whole month and erase everyones stuff once? Maybe it was twice...

Never. Been here since EARLY 2k1.