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by **Cdc2** on Thu Oct 18, 2001 2:53 am

Dragonball XP is an improvised comicstrip series. I will write and illustrate the first strip. The proceeding strips will be written by you, the readers.Once the first strip is posted I will make an announcment here for people to start submitting their scripts for the next strip. I will read all scripts submitted and pick the one I think is best to illustrate. Once the strip is completed and posted to the webpage I will make another announcment here for people to write the next strip and we repeat the process.Writers are free to introduce new characters, bring in old characters, or borrow characters from other series/movies/tv shows/etc. If you want Ranma or Sailor Moon to make a cameo there's nothing I can do to stop you from doing so. The same applies to locations and settings. Let your imagination run wild!This is the first time I've ever done anything like this so the rules and guidelines may evolve and mutate as the series progresses. <a href="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/Forum93/HTML/000190.html">Submit your DBXP script here.</a><a href="http://saiyalings.keenspace.com/dbxp.html">Visit the Dragonball XP mainpage here.</a>
[This message has been edited by cdc2 (edited 10-25-2001).][This message has been edited by cdc2 (edited 10-25-2001).]

by **Michelle** on Thu Oct 18, 2001 5:02 am

Aw, DBZ isn't as cool as LoF, in my opinion. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/frown.gif"> But little Saiyalings is almost as cool, but not as original. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif">
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Michelle the Clueless Gamer, Idler Extraordinaire, Official #1 Forbez Fan of <A HREF="http://www.gamerulers.com/comic" TARGET=_blank>Hack'n'Slash</A> fame.

by **Epic** on Fri Oct 19, 2001 1:46 am

Well, seeing as how I worship the little saiyalings, I am in complete support of this idea too ^_^! O.o; Don, what would be wrong with that..?btw, why doesnt little saiyalings have a message board?*can't wait*

by **PezHed** on Fri Oct 19, 2001 2:35 am

Sweet! Hope you know what you're getting into.... I mean, just look at Wendy Improv...weird...@_@This is going to be so cool! ^^Oh... and a question... can we submit more than once?------------------
...and so I ate him.

by **Prison** on Fri Oct 19, 2001 6:29 am

I think this will be great, its true that LoF is better than DBZ but we get to make our own storyline, it doesnt even have to be like DBZ just with the characters, i think it will be great, i'm thinkin up a comic already.btw CDC will we be able to do our own strips(like draw them) and send them to ya and u post them if ya like it? i think that'd be cool.------------------
Leader of the CDC/Fan Club Dispatch, #2 Fan of LoF and #1 Fan of HnS.:Dispatch:
We're Watching You.Prison.

by **Kojini** on Fri Oct 19, 2001 6:40 am

Cool.

by **Dov Sherman** on Fri Oct 19, 2001 10:13 am

You should probably set a few guidelines about content though... unless you won't mind when people submit scripts that have "and then Belldandy, Urd, and Skuld appear bare-naked and join Bulma and #18 in their crazed orgy".

by **THE guy** on Fri Oct 19, 2001 11:46 am

Comments and questions:Question 1: Do we e-mail you the scripts or do we post them here?Question 2: What's the XP stand for? Is it like Windows XP?Comment 1: I love this idea!! I have a creative mind but my drawing really really really really really really really........ really sucks.Comment 2: I agree with Dov Sherman.------------------
THE Guy: Official #1 Fan Of Something Or Other......

by **Sketchyx2** on Sat Oct 20, 2001 2:15 am

good point also

by **THE guy** on Sat Oct 20, 2001 6:03 am

Aren't pokemon always naked?------------------
THE Guy: Official #1 Fan Of Something Or Other......

by **Kojiro** on Sat Oct 20, 2001 7:33 am

what the $*@% is Edge-World?------------------
The TRUE Brave Fencer

by **THE guy** on Sat Oct 20, 2001 8:30 am

xpcould stand for Xtra Puns! Dragonball... now with more puns then ever!

by **Cdc2** on Sat Oct 20, 2001 11:12 am

Scripts shouldnt be emailed to me. Post them up in the message board thread I will have up once the first strip is up..Only one submission per person.. and remember that only the first three submitted scripts will be read ( I may increase the limit if needed )And yea, I have read quite a number of manga improvs (like Josh's Wendy impro) in the past and have seen how messy can get when some people get to spill their creative juices ^_^;.. That's why I am letting more than ONE person submit the scipt for this improv.. it'll give me the chance to choose the lesser of three evils.. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/wink.gif">
If all three submissions happen to invlove naked pokemon, then it'd probably be a good idea to read the FOURTH script submitted, or even the FIFTH, if necassary. But then again, you're looking at a guy who wrote and drew a vile little thing called Edge-World, so who knows.. I may let naked Pokemon run wild.. ;PAs for where I got XP from.. Micro$oft's new OS did play a big part in it's origin (both are being released in the same week ^^). Plus, if you look closely at the XP, it's an emoticon for a drunk guy sticking his tongue out. I thought it'd be appropriate for this impro. XP

by **PezHed** on Sat Oct 20, 2001 11:23 am

Darn. Not even several strips down the line?Either way, it'll be fun.------------------
...and so I ate him.

by **PezHed** on Sat Oct 20, 2001 11:59 am

That would be very wrong. One thing I can't stand is bad writing. Saturday morning cartoons have been forever ruined due to an excess of puns.------------------
...and so I ate him.

by **PezHed** on Sun Oct 21, 2001 12:35 am

<A HREF="http://geocities.com/cdcuase/EdgeWorld/edge.html" TARGET=_blank>This is Edge World!</A>I liked it. In fact, I just re-read it.------------------
...and so I ate him.

by **Trunks Fan** on Mon Oct 22, 2001 3:29 am

What's the URL to Dragonball XP so I could veiw the comic stips? Sorry if you already posted it or something I just joined today (10/22/01).

by **PezHed** on Mon Oct 22, 2001 5:33 am

All the info is in this thread and then there's the Little Saiyalings strip. <A HREF="http://saiyalings.keenspace.com" TARGET=_blank>http://saiyalings.keenspace.com</A> Otherwise we just have to wait for CDC to show up asap.------------------
...and so I ate him.

by **FinalFlash** on Tue Oct 23, 2001 12:44 am

Here is the Url for dragonball XP- It took me forever to find it:
<A HREF="http://saiyalings.keenspace.com/dbxp.html" TARGET=_blank>http://saiyalings.keenspace.com/dbxp.html</A>

by **Zackarotto** on Wed Oct 24, 2001 12:44 am

What if somebody brings in an anime character cdc isn't familiar with? Will they be skipped over, or will he go around looking for a picture of them so he can draw it? I bet number 1, that's what I'd do. And If somebody wins, can they participate in the next one?

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