I hope this gets posted. I know there have been lots of problems with the forum, and I'm grateful you've stuck it out. I've been fishing for more feedback on Home Fries. I know the humor tends towards the sweet, and while that's not always a bad thing, it's not what I originally envisioned. I guess I started out conservatively, and it was hard to break the pattern. So my question is: is the humor so sweet as to lack zip or flavor? If so, what are some ideas for character development and interaction that would spice things up? I won't make this post too long because there's a good chance it won't show up because of continuing forum problems. But if you're reading this, things may be okay now, so please let me know what you think. Thanks!