I'm liking the wrap-up

Postby BoxJam on Fri Mar 08, 2002 11:16 am

The past few days have been really funny.
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Postby Gravy Boy on Fri Mar 08, 2002 11:55 pm

I'm quite liking where the story ended up going too. When I write these things they often go a totally different direction than I want them to, and frankly, those end up being my favorite sequences.

Just a little fun note to all of you.
Bill, 'the first victim' was originally going to be a caricature of on old friend from high school but I decided to be mean and vent some pent up anger.
It's actually a surprisingly accurate caricature of an ex of mine. Especially the panel of him grinning in the first strip he shows up in. I've shown that to two people who know the actual person and they both noticed it without being told.

Just kind of my own personal inside joke.
Not that I'm bitter...
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Postby BoxJam on Mon Mar 11, 2002 11:52 am

He grinned in all the panels.
http://itsgravy.keenspace.com/d/20011003.html

Up until he died.

Of course.
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Postby Gravy Boy on Tue Mar 12, 2002 12:56 pm

Good point.

I was referring to the third panel mostly.
The one with the impossibly huge grin.

Anyway. Yeah.
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Postby CaptainSpam on Sun Mar 24, 2002 6:14 am

I dunno, I kinda liked the curve thrown with the 'help' the killer had. Your non-sequitur fu is strong.

And the reason he had for the killings... brilliant. Works better if spoken aloud. :-)

All in all, good wrap-up. I like!
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Postby NeroMan on Sun Mar 31, 2002 11:40 am

Comic?

Oh, comic.

ahhh.
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