I can't write poetry.... Can you?

Vercillies · Post by **Vercillies** » Wed May 09, 2001 4:05 am

I'm going to write a poem about a young man that does fan art for alice and hopes alice didn't forget to scan in the pic. What would Kuthra think about it? And in fushgi, I hate that bad guy for doing that to toahomae. I hope that doesn't last long.
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Jazriot · Post by **Jazriot** » Wed May 09, 2001 6:12 am

I'll enter too ^_^ though I'm not good at it either, it'd be fun to try.And Nakago rocks my socks. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/biggrin.gif"> Not as much as Chichiri does, though, hehe.

Lordgeejay · Post by **Lordgeejay** » Wed May 09, 2001 10:06 am

I wrote poems and rhyming riddles when I was back in college. This was about the same time I stopped drawing. And some of those poems were actually intended for a crush of mine. Sadly, I lost those poems. My friends seemed to love it and thought they were not my own writing. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif"> So I guess I can try joining your contest... that is, if I still haven't lost the touch. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/wink.gif">------------------
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Vercillies · Post by **Vercillies** » Wed May 09, 2001 10:26 am

Ok, understood. But do not forget to bring tomarrow, or else i may have to chase you home, and then back to school. I'm not shur if you'll see this before tomarrow but, if you have the soundtrack to irresponible ct, could i borrow it, hehe.

Kern · Post by **Kern** » Wed May 09, 2001 11:51 am

I never did poem of my life..but the prize(a drawing from you) is really tempting, i will give a try ^_~.
What the limit date?------------------
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Kern · Post by **Kern** » Thu May 10, 2001 4:34 am

Don't worry Alice, i think you found someone worst then you since I'm not good with english <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/biggrin.gif">

Chibialex · Post by **Chibialex** » Thu May 10, 2001 4:59 am

jsut one question where do we send ye old poems to?------------------
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Kern · Post by **Kern** » Fri May 11, 2001 12:12 am

I'm french Alice 8-P
And the only reason why my manga not filled with spelling error is someone fix the text for me...

Kern · Post by **Kern** » Fri May 11, 2001 12:28 am

Je suis francais Alice 8-P
Et la seule raison pour laquelle mon manga n'est pas remplie de faute d'ortographe est que quelqu'un corrige les fautes a ma place.Understood that? ^_^ Still want me to write a poem in a language you can't read?

Kern · Post by **Kern** » Fri May 11, 2001 5:17 am

Nha...how can a entire civilisation survive with such low language with so many lack of words <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/tongue.gif">...
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Lordgeejay · Post by **Lordgeejay** » Fri May 11, 2001 11:43 am

Hey Kern, how about writing the poems in French! That should sound nice. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/biggrin.gif">

Lordgeejay · Post by **Lordgeejay** » Sat May 12, 2001 1:14 am

Uh-oh. It seems that I have to resharpen my poetry skills. I dunno if I can give you a very nice poem before time runs out but I'll try. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif">I hope you don't mind if the poems I make rhyme also. Some people think that rhyming poems are for kids but those are the kind of poems I like to read and write. Tell me if that's okay.------------------
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Lordgeejay · Post by **Lordgeejay** » Fri May 18, 2001 1:10 am

BTW, Alice. Is there a theme to the poems needed? Like should it be about love, or hate, or death or a specific thing?

Aldante_Fax · Post by **Aldante_Fax** » Thu Jun 07, 2001 7:02 am

Whee. A po-em, 'ey? With the entire first story arc fresh in my memory, perhaps I can be of a small assistance. Heh.
So...*cough.* Without further adieu..A Poem, by Ted. (That's me! ^^-V-)
--
Long hair,
smooth and fine,
matched with thin arms -
and a hollow face;Pink eyes,
deep in thought,
yet always alert -
a mist of contemplation...
...Or a cauldron of rage.A mind,
intelligence overwhelming,
astounding in the accuracy.I like to write about myself! ^^
--
Whee. That was fun. Horrible and clich

Kern · Post by **Kern** » Fri Jun 08, 2001 10:12 am

must...write..something..urgh
okay let improvise a poem..i'm not even sure if it going to look like a poem! i never did that and i don't know what is poem for english people...
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No alpha nor omega
no begining nor end
Human living trought eternity
Seeking a god not too well
commiting sin without real goal
forgetting errors very well
saying farewell to the past
repeating itself for all eternity
daring to call themself superior
waiting the savior
to repair errors
who never come
*****************
Well i could write more but it been 10 minute i'm staring at this msg

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Aldante_Fax · Post by **Aldante_Fax** » Sat Jun 09, 2001 11:00 am

*sweatdrops* When I say 'talking about myself' in the poem, it was referring to Wil. I dun got long hair! But I'm intellimagent. Methinks.-Ted(...Oy?)

~Dragoness~ · Post by **~Dragoness~** » Mon Jun 11, 2001 2:02 am

I know the poetry contest has been over but... I'd just like to recommend a friend who writes poetry better than Emily D. Alice if you're still interested email him; you might've seen his artwork on Oekaki. Griffinm16@aol.com
He writes so many poems ( I think I despise him for that ) and he's really good at it too. - - Oh and, yay! I finally got a username! woohoo!

~Dragoness~ · Post by **~Dragoness~** » Mon Jun 11, 2001 2:09 am

Oh I forgot... He writes death poems allot. Mebbe I should force him to send a few heh ^_^

Buckley · Post by **Buckley** » Sun Aug 26, 2001 6:22 am

That smile sparked my hunger.
That familliar gleam of need,
in those eyes;
To share the sorrow of another.
The aprehension in your words,
and the tender lips,
which they came dancing through.
A verbal fa