Tear me a new one (fantasy humor Critique)

[Warlordofnoodles]

So, I know some of the things I think is wrong with my comic.... I'm wondering if you all share my sentiments... Or if there are things further still that I can improve upon that I missed (heavily possible).

"Brother Swan" Is Fantasy/Humor, mostly, with violence in later chapters....
http://warlordofnoodles.comicgenesis.com


EDIT: sorry for the broken link, fixed now

[VeryCuddlyCornpone]

pst- edit your post to take that last "//url" out of there, friend! It's coming up a broken link!

[Warlordofnoodles]

pst- edit your post to take that last "//url" out of there, friend! It's coming up a broken link!

Thanks for telling me^^ Fixed now

[[geoduck]]

Your art is good, but those big honking earrings are rather jarring, since it appears that you're cutting/pasting/deforming them into position. Unless it's a plot-point that they look out of place, I'd say steel your nerve and start drawing them, even if means you have to simplify their design.

And adding a cast page is always a good idea.

[Warlordofnoodles]

Your art is good, but those big honking earrings are rather jarring, since it appears that you're cutting/pasting/deforming them into position. Unless it's a plot-point that they look out of place, I'd say steel your nerve and start drawing them, even if means you have to simplify their design.

And adding a cast page is always a good idea.

Thanks guy. Noted.

Learning how to fight with the HTML and whatnot. Making the cast page has been more trouble than What it should be^^0

[[geoduck]]

Learning how to fight with the HTML and whatnot. Making the cast page has been more trouble than What it should be

Feel free to use mine as an example/template; you'd obviously need to change the pictures and text, but it'll give you an idea of what you might need.