Still Life Cartoon Crit. !!!

[Still Life]

Hi everybody! I was hoping i could get some feedback on my very first webcomic Still Life! please don't be shy to tell me what I can improve on (and what you like too) but I'm mostly looking for constructive crits. I know the way its displayed isn't the best but I would like to get enough strips for it to be worth buying a domain.

I suppose I should tell you what Still Life is about huh? to boil it down its about the life of our "hero" Garry, a very average person with a very unusual life not of his own making. How he handles it is up to you to find out. Thanks and enjoy!

[Still Life]

just took Still Life off of blogger (finally) and it now resembles an actual web comic! let me know what you think!

[VeryCuddlyCornpone]

Just took a look at your comic. I like it. Not enough material for me to make a more helpful critique yet (probably wouldn't be able to anyway right now on account of I'm all tired and so forth) but as you build up your site more people will be able to latch on more. Simple, lighthearted, seems promising. Keep it up, bro.

[Still Life]

Thanks!

[Jin-roh]

Pretty clever. I like it. I think a lot of people will relate to the character's plight. We've all been in that kind of situation at one point in life.

Everything looks good so far, but be careful about the "devil boss." If you keep making him over-the-top "fear me" evil he'll become boring quickly. Lucky shows a lot of promise. The sheer morbitiy of that character should keep him interesting for a while.