Doodles 8 - I'm not an artist, but I play one on CG

CJBurgandy · Post by **CJBurgandy** » Mon Oct 08, 2007 10:33 am

[AlmightyPyro] wrote:That's an awesome idea CJ, you should totally make that costume fo reals!

Knowing how much time and fabric go into a dress like that, it wouldn't happen this year.

[AlmightyPyro] · Post by **[AlmightyPyro]** » Mon Oct 08, 2007 11:13 am

cjburgandy wrote:
[AlmightyPyro] wrote:That's an awesome idea CJ, you should totally make that costume fo reals!
Knowing how much time and fabric go into a dress like that, it wouldn't happen this year.

Ah ha... But it would happen!

Rock_dash · Post by **Rock_dash** » Tue Oct 09, 2007 9:09 am

The Mortician wrote:For Rock's birthday (belated)

Sput says the torso is long I see it now.

Actually, I think the torso and arms are fine. It's just the legs that could stand to be lengthened.

Killbert-Robby · Post by **Killbert-Robby** » Tue Oct 09, 2007 10:11 am

I actually think that the leg/torso ratio is about right, its just the shirt hangs too low, so it doesnt LOOK right. Make it more obvious where the hips are.

Col · Post by **Col** » Tue Oct 09, 2007 10:40 am

The Mortician wrote:For Rock's birthday (belated)

Sput says the torso is long I see it now.

Despite the issues already listed, this is one of the most confident pieces I've seen you do, Mort. Nice job.

Mvmarcz · Post by **Mvmarcz** » Tue Oct 09, 2007 4:06 pm

How about some half naked lady to ease the tension?

Whoo! tan lines. I realised I'd never tried them before

This is a wallpaper for the hubby's psp.

CaptainClaude · Post by **CaptainClaude** » Tue Oct 09, 2007 4:07 pm

gotta say, that bottom looks fucked up.

like its not supposed to be connected at all. and other stuff.

Black Sparrow · Post by **Black Sparrow** » Tue Oct 09, 2007 4:08 pm

Mv, you always know just what we need.

CaptainClaude · Post by **CaptainClaude** » Tue Oct 09, 2007 4:09 pm

you damn fool.

throwing your anatomy lecture out the window on the same damn page!

Black Sparrow · Post by **Black Sparrow** » Tue Oct 09, 2007 4:10 pm

Quiet, you.

Mvmarcz · Post by **Mvmarcz** » Tue Oct 09, 2007 4:14 pm

yes I'm aware of the issues with the bum,
I haven't been drawing anything worth much at all outside of classwork, just stare at her chest k thnx

Linkara · Post by **Linkara** » Tue Oct 09, 2007 4:38 pm

mvmarcz wrote:yes I'm aware of the issues with the bum,
I haven't been drawing anything worth much at all outside of classwork, just stare at her chest k thnx

But... But... We can't see it! But you told us to look at it and-

*Head asplode*

Jesusabdullah · Post by **Jesusabdullah** » Tue Oct 09, 2007 5:19 pm

Komiyan wrote:Also, don't take every criticism as a challenge!

Some others I did (one's nws, none of them particularly witty)
One a friend did (Also nws)
Make your own!

BeefotronX · Post by **BeefotronX** » Tue Oct 09, 2007 8:50 pm

A Stinkoman sprite comic:

Jesusabdullah · Post by **Jesusabdullah** » Tue Oct 09, 2007 11:44 pm

[AlmightyPyro] wrote:GRUMPY!!!

Oh man, that's badass. Yours are way better than mine.

Keffria · Post by **Keffria** » Wed Oct 10, 2007 3:47 am

Hey, guys. It's pretty clear that our good friend bob281 isn't looking for advice on improving his delightfully exaggerated superhero designs. How about we let his argument drop and focus on some other doodles before this thread implodes?

Post by **Mercury Hat** » Wed Oct 10, 2007 3:56 am

Keff said what I was going to, but I'd like to add:

I don't like this new trend of critiqueing the crap out of someone's drawings because you don't like the person who drew it. This isn't the first time, and I don't like that people are thinking just because it's under the guise of ART CRITIQUE that they can dogpile on someone like this. The thinking here being "Well I can't just outright insult him, if only--WAIT, HIS DRAWING, ART CRITIQUE" and it's wrong, wrong, wrong.

Look, Mort's piece could have and should have had more people pointing things out and his post was practically inviting critiques. Instead, he got 4 posts, most of them were little one-liners.

Ultimately, people are falling into a habit of giving longwinded critiques to people whom they know won't listen as a form of an attack instead of giving them to people who need them and want them in the form of helpfulness.

In short, stop being so catty.

Keffria · Post by **Keffria** » Wed Oct 10, 2007 3:58 am

Okay. Everyone stop posting in this thread until I can split it off - then you can go hog-wild.

Edit: vvvvvv DAMMIT JOEL

Edit 2: Further bitchery related to exploding biceps can go here.

Joel Fagin · Post by **Joel Fagin** » Wed Oct 10, 2007 4:00 am

Mercury Hat wrote:In short, stop being so catty.

Except McDuffies of course.

I agree, BTW. This place is getting miserably unconstructive.

- Joel Fagin

Laemkral · Post by **Laemkral** » Wed Oct 10, 2007 4:07 am

Hmm, for Mort's work it looks generally alright. I'd suggest taking another look at the neck/shoulder area. It seems to be too short, IMO. A teensy bit longer and it should look more natural.