Robby: Nice improvement. I find the legs and waist a little awkward though. It's not uncommon in cartoony styles for a buff character to have little legs but I think those could be a bit wider on the body.
Drawing that good and having a girlfriend that draws that good, it's practically the same.
'Zactly. Well, I have been working on my drawing abilities, but... yeah =/ Anyways, for clarity, the cat pic was drawn by Brooke Scovil (the artist from Orange Revolution) and colored by Cathy Hookey.
"Seems like the only comics that would be good to this person are super action crazy lines, mega poses!"
Killbert-Robby wrote:I find my patience growing, I never thought I could be one of those guys who spends hours on a picture doing it properly with guide lines and stuff. Good discipline training XD
Critique will not be "OMFG ITS PERFECT STFU"'d ;)
Anatomically speaking, those are really tiny hips. I mean he's wearing a size XLarge or bigger T shirt and size 2 pants. Unless he's really been working out his upper body, I'd expect him to be a touch more balanced. You also might want to make the Tshirt hang straighter--odd looking taper you've got going on at the bottom. I like the shading on the pants, makes them look more realistic.
I actually think she's cute (although I'm not fond of the bell). ^^
Quote of the Moment: “Greetings, my friend. We are all interested in the future, for that is where you and I are going to spend the rest of our lives.” ~Criswell~
What you don't realize at first is that those ribbons are there to protect her head from being scratched up.
And possibly also to catch cat drool from their many many naps.
"when a hero dies, he becomes a legend, that legend, with time, becomes a myth, then a fable, that fable, is then carved in stone, and when that stone crumbles, it is lost" - Takahn.
But he's still improved over the years.
