Ah, yes, I know that combat is difficult.
With the number of fight scenes I've written, displaying down to the intricate motions of the master swordsman's wrist, I should know.
I've written litterally over a page on ONE forty-five second fight scene.
A friend and I actually recently wrote a lengthy (chapter-sized) five-minuete fight between a couple of Cyborgs (an Archangel and a shadowrunner), that was quite interesting, started on top of a really really tall building and ending on street level.
Anyway, cant wait to see that stroy arc! keep up the good work!
"Justice is the Art of the Thief"
"Weapons and armor are for those who lack skill, Honor and courage"
~Drunken Monk to a Paladin in the tavern. No bystanders were harmed in the ensuing brawl~