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Whee. Just making a thread here for you. It has nice views.
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I shall post something in this thread!

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Omigosh dude, you totally just did!
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Oh. Btw. It's the Beach not the Romantic. :| I just looked at the script and noticed I'd given it the wrong title. Apologies.
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Oh, and, I AM going to post something here. I swear. Got halfway through my cover and first page so far.

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Most awesome!

BTW I think you have, er. Two months, it looks like. To get everythin' finished and all. From the schedule organising I've been doing. Of course, I seem to have lost my web mistress... soo. It may be longer.

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Aughk is never a happy sound. :(

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This is my rough inks on the cover. I put a dab of sunscreen lotion on Blackaby's face before I got to the part of the script with the nose gag, but I was able to tie that in visually when the angel bully wipes the lotion off Blackaby's not-nose at the same time he points out the lack of noseness.

I'll surely have more progress in two more months. :wink:

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Here's a better sound: WHEEEEEEEEAAAAHHHOMFG!!!!! I believe it translates to: This is surely awesome.

I dig Blackaby's expression. I've never seen anyone look quite so uncomfortable on a beach.
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blackaby wrote:Most awesome!

BTW I think you have, er. Two months, it looks like. To get everythin' finished and all. From the schedule organising I've been doing.
I agree - most awesome :)

Anyway, just in case you're flitting past this thread, Sortelli (if not ,I'm talking to air, but I'll be PMing you at some stage in the near future, anyway, I think) - The Beach should start on the 14th of January (this is assuming I've dated the current issue correctly - I don't always).

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RAAAWR! Here's the one piece of finished coloring that DID NOT EXPLODE ON ME AFTER I HAD FINISHED IT. So much work exploded like... aaaargh!

I know, belatedly, that Angel is supposed to have unshaven legs. Should I try to color in a few hairs? My first attempt looked awful.

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Omigosh, as I said to Cissy before... Awesome :D

*is filled with joy*

Well I guess she could have shaved them before going out. Not to look good, just because she'd have to hair-dry them after.
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I am not happy with that one, it needed... a border! Yeah. A vacation photo looking thing.

And, I know this is like basically the one thing I had to show months ago, but I have other pages inked. They just rejected color. >:{

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omfg his screamy expression.
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Oh dear, oh dear, oh dear oh dear oh dear.

I was putting the lettering for this comic after coloring pages when I realized a problem. I had finished the layout for the entire story, including where I would put speech bubbles and approximately what was in them, a long long time ago. And that's what I've been working off of ever since.

I thought I had saved the exact script you sent me to disk but I've lost the file and the private message you sent it in to boot. So I'm going off of memory to fill in the dialogue here, but just to be safe do you happen to have the original script so I don't wander too far off the path?

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And, also, BEHOLD!.

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My story is better than yours, Sunny D.

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But MY milkshake brings all the boys to the yard!

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And eventually you'll be able to update every day :P.
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IT BEGINS

How shall I provide the new pages? Links here or e-mail or . . .?

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