by Wandering Observer on Thu Aug 21, 2008 8:57 am
I have to be honest Lewis, you've grown by leaps and bounds on this comic, but you're first strips are very difficult to read through, because of the artwork and some story elements that you've grown out of. For me, it's a tossup, because I'd really like to see more new updates, rather than old ones.
Personally, I would say that if you're going to be rebuilding the first strips, you need to put careful thought in how to do them-There are plot and story continuities that deserve to be rebuilt as well. The first issue lacks elements that make it a good plot, and all of the first three issues could be expanded and molded to better fit your storytelling style.
I'd say keep the project in mind, for when crossoverlord ends, and you have more comics per week. But take a little while to think about it. You could do some good things with revisions, or you could do great things. The choice is yours.
"Safe and sound in its shell, the precious pearl is the slave of the currents."
-IRIS