End of Book 1, writer asks for feedback

[Kitsune76]

Hi y'all<P>Well, as I said at the front, Book 1 is complete, so now I'm after knowing what y'all thought? Is the humour still working? Do you mind the long stories or would you rather see some shorter ones? Does anyone care about the major characters, or are y'all after the Fridge Monster and Amarilis only? <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif"> And the art, you liking? What's working, what isn't, GIve me some details people!<P>Ta.<P>Kitsune<P>------------------
<A HREF="http://kitsune76.keenspace.com//" TARGET=_blank>C.Ulture Shocked</A> <P>It's British.<P>But not in a good way...

[TheangryQ]

The humour's definitely working. I like the long stories, I do care about the major characters, but the Fridge Monster and Amarilis will always have a special place in my heart.