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Post by Xavier »

what do you think is going to happen?

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Post by Neil Murphy »

Don't stop the current story line!!! Keep the gayness going!!

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Post by Fingo »

But they're so CUTE!
*I felt the Hate rise up in me
Kneel down and clear the Stone of leaves
I wander out where you can't see
Inside my shell I Wait and Bleed*

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Post by Xavier »

and you'll see them later. i just feel like i'm not being fair to the other carachers.

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Post by Prettysenshi »

I don't see why you feel the need to cut down on the "manlove" in your comic. I didn't think you were overdoing it at all. If it's needed for the story, then by all means, go for it.

Plus, it seems like the main characters is new with the whole homosexual thing. It would be nice if you explored this a bit more, so that it can build some character development.

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The page for friday, march 17 is hilarious. Forgive me for not knowing character names, but the blond girl is hilarious. The page made me laugh. Good job.

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Post by Prettysenshi »

Yay for working on backgrounds. It made a big difference. If you could just darken the lineart a bit, it would make a world of difference.

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Post by Fingo »

I love the pixie thing. It's like X's gaydar condensed into a physical form and split away from him only to return later and lead him on a quest to FIND THE GAY!!!!


... yeah.
*I felt the Hate rise up in me
Kneel down and clear the Stone of leaves
I wander out where you can't see
Inside my shell I Wait and Bleed*

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Post by Xavier »

heh. after a lot of people asking me, "what do those asterisk things do, anyway?" i thought they should serve a more important purpose than just being shiny.

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Post by Fingo »

NEVER downplay the importance of being shiney.
*I felt the Hate rise up in me
Kneel down and clear the Stone of leaves
I wander out where you can't see
Inside my shell I Wait and Bleed*

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Post by Katbotz »

Fingo wrote:NEVER downplay the importance of being shiney.
xD Shmebekka is the best! <3

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Post by FireOne »

*Impatient to see what happens next* I also really need to find myself an artist so i can get my own comic going...

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