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PostPosted: Fri Oct 26, 2001 7:32 am
by Fx1013
Hmmm... good job so far<P>panel 1:
Goku: What was that!
SS: Crap, He is already caught onto my trail, we need to get out of here!<P>Panel 2:
<SS running while grabing Goku by the arm>
Goku: Hey, slow down, It can't be that bad!!
SS: Yes he can. I will explain later, we need to move, fast!<P>Panel 3:
<close up of Goku>
Goku: *Perhaps today will be more interesting then I oringinally thought.....*<P>Panel 4:
<Cut to a cloaked figure standing in a pile of smoking rubble>
Cloaked Figure: hehehe... so the changling is going to try to run away. Regardless, he will not escape me...hehe.

PostPosted: Fri Oct 26, 2001 7:49 am
by Michelle
Whoo, LS fans are coming from anywhere to sign up for the boards and play! Amazing!<P>------------------
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 26, 2001 8:00 am
by Fx1013
hmmm, it left of parts that I put in <, carrots. oh well, here are the obserations I had, not that it matters<P>panel 2:
SS is running and grabbing Goku by the arm<P>Panel 3:
close up of Goku<P>Panel 4:
Cut to a cloaked figure standing in a pile of smoking rubble

PostPosted: Fri Oct 26, 2001 11:02 am
by Yahiko
Strip #4<P>Panel #1:
SS(scared look)-OH NO THEYRE HERE!
Goku-(confused look)What? Who's here?<P>Panel #2:
Shows 2 men standing, shaded so you cant see them.<P>Panel #3:
SS(grabs Goku)-We gotta get out of here!
Goku-Wh-Where are we going?<P>Panel #4:
Shows the faces of the 2 men. Very dark and sinister looking. Identical. One has an evil grin and the other an angry look.<P>

PostPosted: Fri Oct 26, 2001 11:23 am
by Fx1013
not that it matters but some of mine got left off when I tried to use <, carrots, to bracet, but regardless....
panel two
ss. is running while holding Goku by his arm<P>panel three
close up of Goku<P>panel 4
cut to, ie he is all alone.

PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2001 3:47 am
by Nicko786
I like maxim's idea. You should use it.

PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2001 3:50 am
by Nicko786
I like maxim's idea. You should use it.

PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2001 4:12 am
by Cdc2
While this msg board was down I, with the help of Michelle, created a new board for all things dragonball related.<P>So any new DBXP submissions should be sent to <A HREF="" TARGET=_blank></A> <P>Dont worry.. I'll still read all the submissions for #4 that were posted here.
But Anything posted after this message will be ignored.. <IMG SRC="">

PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2001 7:51 am
by Maxim48166
hey, the link don't work...or maybe the whoe message board don't work...

PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2001 10:07 am
by DarkSonic8000
Panel One:
*shows Fat Buu about to slam into the ground again*
Fat Buu: BUUUU!<P>Panel Two:
SS: It thinks im a candy bar because im squishy...
Goku: (disgusted look)(poking SS) Ewww....
SS: (angry)HEY!<P>Panel Three:
Goku: Ill save you...whats your name?
SS: Im Jim
Goku: (here like stance)Ill save you Jim!<P>Panel Four:
*Sound Effect* BOOOOOOOM!
Goku: (surprised)Maaaybe not...<P>------------------
...Step Into The Darkness...

PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2001 10:31 am
by Maxim48166
Panel 1
SS: Some Capsule Corp. people are trying to capture me for their experiments!
GOKU: ...<P>Panel 2
GOKU: ...
SS: We don't have time to stand around! C'mon!<P>Panel 3
(SS is running, dragging Goku by the arm)
Goku: WAIT!<P>Panel 4
SS: What?!
GOKU: I'm hungry. Give me an apple.
SS: ...<P>Sorry about the dealy, my internet was screwed really bad.

PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2001 10:35 am
by Maxim48166
You can imagine that this leads to the meeting of Bulma, right? Also, I meant to say delay, not dealy.

PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2001 10:41 am
by Godshope2246
Wait a second on the dbxp main page it has 2 different message borad links to put up our scripts where are we supposed to put them?

PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2001 11:07 am
by E Sailor Whisker
WHERE do we post???<P>All wells, here it is!<P>Frame One:
Shapeshifter: Oh, no! She's here!
Goku: Who?<P>Frame Two:
Shapeshifter: A rare life-form's WORST NIGHTMARE...<P>Frame Three:
(Chibi Piccolo comes running like the dogs of heck are on his tail)
Goku: ?<P>Frame Four:
Shapeshifter: She's a crazed, Universal, Scientific Genius...
Goku: Oh! I have a friend like that! Her name's Bulma!<P>Hee hee hees! Looks like Goku's not HELPING any!!!<P>Haves Funs!!!

PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2001 11:19 am
by THE guy
SS: I've got to hide!<P>PANEL 2:
SS is back into a tree, Goku leans against it again.<P>PANEL 3:
A bunch of men run in.
MAN: Hey kid! You see any shapeshifting protoplasmic goo around here?<P>PANEL 4:
Goku: Um... no.
MAN: Damn, he couldn't of gotten far....

PostPosted: Tue Oct 30, 2001 8:18 am
by Prison
the link won't work for me either.<P>------------------
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