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Post by Maxim48166 »

Panel 1
GOKU: So...you're saying...that you're not a tree, right?<P>Panel 2
SS: YES, FOR THE FINAL TIME I AM NOT REALLY A TREE.<P>Panel 3
GOKU: ...you're SURE you're not a tree?
SS: ...<P>Panel 4
GOKU: ...
SS: ...
GOKU: ...can I have an apple?
SS: ...

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Post by SSj2Mitch »

PANEL 1
GOKU:Wow, i've never met a shape-shifter before.
SS:Thats besides the point I need something from you.<P>PANEL 2
GOKU (Puzzled look):And whats that?
SS:See that rock over there?<P>PANEL 3
GOKU(looks behind him to see the rock):Yeah!
SS:Good<P>PANEL 4
SS(starts to absorb Gokus energy):I got you fool!
GOKU (thinking):Now what about this rock?

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Post by Yahiko »

Frame 1:
Goku>So whats a shapeshifter?
Shapeshifter>..Umm..Lets just put it this way. I change change my shape.<P>Frame 2:
Goku>You can turn into anything?
SS>Yea..just watch this
The shapeshifter starts to change into Chi-Chi<P>Frame 3:
He finishes shifting. But Goku is not there. The shapeshifter is confused.<P>Frame 4:
It shows Goku running away with his hangs flying in the air.
Goku>WAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!

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Post by Nieh »

nothing Monty Python-ish, huh!?<P>panel 1
Goku: So this doesn't have to do with the apples?
Shapeshifter: actually it does
panel 2
SS: you see, the last time you ate an apple, it was actually my twin brother in disguise
goku: if you're a shapeshifter how can you tell if you're a twin?
panel 3
SS: *gets angry* shut up! you ate my brother and I demand revenge!
Goku: *gets ready to fight* ok, if you want to fight that's fine with me
Panel 4
SS: mega ass attack! (or something similar)*turns into an elephant and sits on Goku*
Goku: Uggh...*arm and leg are sticking out from under elephant twitching

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Post by Animefanz@aol »

The suspense is killing me. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif"><P>And why does my screen name have "@aol" in it!? <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/frown.gif">

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<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Animefanz@aol:
<B>The suspense is killing me. <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/smile.gif"><P>And why does my screen name have "@aol" in it!? <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/frown.g ... <P>Perhaps because you filled in your e-mail address one too many times. <P><P>------------------
...and so I ate him.

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<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by THE guy:
<B>PANEL 1:
Goku standing and looking behind him.
Goku: Who's there?<P>PANEL 2:
The tree grows a face.
Tree: me.<P>PANEL 3:
Goku looking terrified.
Goku: WAHHH!! My greatest fear come to life! The trees are getting revenge for all those apples I picked!<P>PANEL 4:
The tree has turned into a man.
Man: No, no. I'm a shapeshifter.
Goku: Shapeshifter?
Shapeshifter: I change shapes. Like this.....<P>*************<P>btw ziRta, good script, I was gonna do that! That's the thing that popped into my head right when I finished reading the strip.</B><HR></BLOCKQUOTE><P>
***<P>Gee, thanx! =) But yours was definitely better XDDD!<P>

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Post by ChiPsiUpsilon »

A little attempt at writing the next one:<P>Panel 1-
Shapeshifter: "Listen up, they're already here. We don't have much time, so I'm only going to explain this once."<P>Panel 2-
*close up of Shapeshifter's face in a corner, with a giant speech bubble filled with lots of text occupying the rest of this panel*
Shapshifter: "I'm being chased by a group of men. A group of dangerous, deadly, and ruthless men. I can't hide from them because they can see through my disguises. I need your help. I posses an item, an item which they want. They'll do anything to get it. If they get their hands on it, the fate of this planet, and perhaps the entire universe, is doomed."<P>Panel 3-
*zooms out to include both Goku and Shapeshifter. Goku is sleeping(or engaged in some other activities which clearly show he wasn't paying attention, such as playing with birds or observing ants)*
Shapeshifter (angrily, perferablely with enlarged head and veins popping up, as seen in typical comedical anime): "ARE YOU EVEN LISTENING TO ME?"
Goku: "Huh?"
<p>[This message has been edited by ChiPsiUpsilon (edited 10-25-2001).]

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Post by Benplante »

Okay, I'll give it a shot for strip 4...<P>PANEL 1
A wide shot of a clearing, we see several guys wearing the same clothes as our shapeshifter getting out of a just landed vehicle (the boom).
SS offscreen: Gah!!<P>PANEL 2
Our SS kneels down to Goku
SS: Okay, listen. I'm gonna turn into a rock, and you sit on me. When those guys come near, say you haven't seen me. Got that?
Goku (with that dumb "Goku" look): K...<P>PANEL 3
A few seconds later the guys are at Goku, who is sitting on a rock.
Guy 1: You.
Guy 2: Have you seen anything unusual?
SS as a rock thinking: Please god...<P>PANEL 4
Goku: No. OH! There was this guy who shapeshifted into a rock and told me to sit on him.
SS: ARG!
Goku: Oh sorry.<p>[This message has been edited by Benplante (edited 10-25-2001).]

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Post by PezHed »

Darn... that was a better one. Think I'll try something a little different.<P>Panel 1
Wide shot. Goku and the Shapeshifter can be seen small in the foreground. Background is a mountian. A large spacecraft(ID4 looking saucer) has smashed or blasted its way through the side of the mountian. Lots of smoke on the mountian side behind and around the craft
SS: !!<P>Panel 2
View similar to previous strip. Shapeshifter has grabbed a hold of Goku's arm and is begining to run offscreen with a suprised Goku in tow, just off the ground.
Goku: What's tha..gah!
SS: No time! They're already here!

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Post by Lord Dap »

One shot covering the entire panel of an alien saucer crashing into a mountain with smoke, dust and flames everywhere!

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Post by Michelle »

My post disapeared! Here it is again:<P>PANEL 1
GOKU: What the?
(Four adult Omnies walk in, with Dispatchey gear.)<P>PANEL 2
OMNI 1: (To Goku) Greetings, Inferior.
OMNI 2: (Shape-Shifter)Greetings, Rastlik*.
SS: "Brethren."
GOKU: Nyyahahhh...<P>PANEL 3:
OMNI 1: There is nothing to fear, Inferior.
OMNI 3: Yes, you see... <P>------------------
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Post by E Sailor Whisker »

In response to the Monty Python reference, here's a fun one, just for yous, guys, CDC!!!<P>Haves Funs with its!!!<P>Frame One:
Goku: Shapeshif-f-ter? What's that?
Shapeshifter: Well, you see...<P>Frame Two:
(Shapeshifter notices the confused look on Goku's face)<P>Frame Three:
Shapeshifter: I can turn myself into different things.
Goku: (Blank stare). OH! NOW I get it!!!<P>Frame Four:
Shapeshifter: (Sticks his tounge out at Goku.) NYAH!!!
(An elephant squashes Goku at the same moment.)

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Post by Radiodj19 »

<IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/wink.gif"> i have another idea:
panel 1: goku: so what is your name.
panel 2: shape shifter: i..... do not know a saiyan named bardock destroyed my home planet the second i was born
panel 3: ss: but my parents would not stay there they stole bardock's ship and they put me in i flew away and landed here.
panel 4: ss: i tought people to shape shifts like my best student. puar.
panel 5:ss: hey you look alot like bardock
panel 6: goku <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/confused.gif">

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Post by Krillin928 »

I'll try this again...<P>Panel 1:
(shows back of Goku and Shapeshifter, smoke is blowing at them from the blast and both are covering their faces from the smoke)
Goku: Man!! What happened?!<P>Panel 2:
SS: Listen, this is why I need you! A group of very powerful warriors will emerge from that blast!I was hiding from them but they must have discovered me, I'll have to transform into something fast, lead me to the most safest place you can think of!<P>Panel 3:
(the Shapeshifter transforms into a rocket)<P>Panel 4:
(Goku is now riding on SS)
SS: Where's the safest place you can think of?
Goku: (Pointing) That way! To the turtle guy, Master Roshi!

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Post by Atomusuku-sama »

Cool, I humbly thank you for choosing my entry for strip #3! <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/biggrin.gif"><P>------------------
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Post by Godshope2246 »

Okay time for me to have a crack at it now.<P>panel 1:
ss looking very worried - ohh no she found me
goku looking at ss as if he is very strange- who found you?<P>panel 2:
veiw shifts to show chi-chi comming out of the bushes looking like she is about to kill someone.<P>panel 3:
goku - okay whatever you did i can't help you now so don't even ask (goku walks away)<P>panel 4:
ss runing after goku away from chi-chi - wait you got to be able to help me

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Post by Erm »

I'il just try something..<P><P>PANEL 1<P>zooming in at a crater with a saiyan alike spacepod in it<P>Goku: Who could that be?
SS: The one who's been chosen to hunt me, please help me.<P>PANEL 2<P>mr.Satan emerges from the spacepod<P>Goku smiling: He looks funny!
SS: You fool! He's probably the most powerful being in the world...
Goku: Oh?<P>PANEL 3<P>Satan: Stay where you are if you value your life!
...goku sneaks away...
Satan: Both of you!
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Post by MiraiTrunks »

Eh..I'll give this a shot <IMG SRC="http://www.keenspace.com/forums/biggrin.gif"><P>PANEL 1
Goku looking offscreen
Goku: Woah..those people sure look angry
The shapeshifter has a strange look on his face<P>PANEL 2
Bom! Sound effect. The shapeshifter has changed form to reaveal to be Oolong. Goku is looking at him.
Goku: Oolong? Oh! You can only hold a form for 5 minutes, right?<P>PANEL 3
Oolong grabs the front of Goku's shirt with a desperate look on his face
Oolong:Goku! You gotta help me! They'll kill me!
Goku: (looking confused) What did you do to make them so angry?<P>PANEL 4
Both look down to notice the panties Oolong still has in his hand<P>

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