Help?

Catlegend · Post by **Catlegend** » Tue Dec 18, 2007 1:28 am

Okay, by a show of hands, if I put the Cat Legend rewrite on here (no pictures, just script), how many of you would be willing to be little bitches and tell me when something doesn't make sense or is lame? I know some of you spelling and grammar Nazi's would have a field day with my writing. ^_^

Obviously, it irks me when people complain about CLs rocky beginning, so I've begun reworking the comic to include earlier glimpses of the future and more fluid chapters. So far so good I think. I've streamlined a mess load!

Draw backs? You can't be all fluffy and be like, "Oh, that's fantastic, Moss!" (Even when it's utter crumb- yes, I admit, I have written crap before and probably will again). You'd have to be willing to say, "Gaaaawd you've spent three pages on Dor! When will you get back to Cat?!?- Which I know would be hard for some of you. And another thing....

There would be spoilers. Not like, little teeny spoilers, but basis for the whole plot kinda spoilers (because doing so, would easily create plot holes if I edited references just for forum sake).

Anybody willing to bitch about Cat Legend? I know you all have it in you!

Miri · Post by **Miri** » Tue Dec 18, 2007 6:51 am

I'll do it!
point me towards what I must bitch about Moss!

Catlegend · Post by **Catlegend** » Tue Dec 18, 2007 10:41 am

*Points Carnival Barker cane towards Miri*

That's a brave girl!!

*Waves straw hat at disinterested crowd of on lookers*

Any other takers for the biotching and berating? Come on people! It aint difficult and there will be plenty of fodder!

Ruby Falls · Post by **Ruby Falls** » Tue Dec 18, 2007 1:31 pm

Why Moss, fixing grammar is one of my favorite activities! I am the Editing Nazi.

שועל · Post by **שועל** » Tue Dec 18, 2007 1:48 pm

I would gladly. Although, my grammatical abilities probably aren't all that awe inspiring.

Point and example, this post just the instead of that for an entire day.

Voyd · Post by **Voyd** » Tue Dec 18, 2007 9:51 pm

heehee, could probably use the practise for editing for my next year... so count me in?

We can still point out bits that work well or that we like in the midst of being little scavenging crow editors, yes?

Catlegend · Post by **Catlegend** » Tue Dec 18, 2007 11:16 pm

Well, of course, that keeps Moss from throwing her computer across the room when things don't work

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If I'm awake when I get off work I'll show you a few pages.

שועל · Post by **שועל** » Wed Dec 19, 2007 12:37 pm

Do we count talking in the third person a grammatical mistake?

Irish · Post by **Irish** » Wed Dec 19, 2007 11:52 pm

Hey hey, I'd be glad to help if I may

Catlegend · Post by **Catlegend** » Thu Dec 20, 2007 12:05 am

שועל wrote:Do we count talking in the third person a grammatical mistake?

It's pretty bad when I have to stop and think which tense is third person.

Moss will not dignify that with an answer! Har-umphah-phumf!

Catlegend · Post by **Catlegend** » Thu Dec 20, 2007 3:45 am

gonna start a thread called "spoilers". Feel free to post in there. I just want it to be clear for anyone who doesn't wanna see.