The WRITTEN story: updates and crit

a tale of adventure and battle, of a man and his unlikely allies as they take part in a war fought by immortals, but a war that will be won by mortals. Fallen empires are on the rise, and ancient races long forgotten must save themselves from those who seek to destroy all that will not submit to the rule of the East. Warning: contains ruggedly-handsome [half]men.

The WRITTEN story: updates and crit

Postby Warofwinds on Tue Jun 21, 2005 2:29 pm

As of June 21, the written story has reached 276 typed pages, and has been edited/revised to the best of my attention span. There are 16 chapters, a prologue and an introduction, though the story itself should end at about 500 pages. The comic is currently on chapter 1, and about three more pages ought to end that. The link to the story can be found on my site in the horizontal nav bar.

If anyone's interested, I'd like some feedback. This thread is open for story discussion.
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Postby Warofwinds on Tue Aug 30, 2005 5:15 pm

As of 8/30, going back through the story and editing specifically for diction and tone. I want the beginning darker than it was. I'm about 1/3 of the through The Past part I right now.
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