Dead Coyote Talks

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tirusthevirus
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Dead Coyote Talks

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Dead Coyote Talks is a web comic of black humor in which a dead coyote talks.

Some viewers may find offensive.

Enjoy.

http://deadcoyotetalks.blogspot.com/

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I'm sorry, but I don't see anything good about this comic. I mean it's the same scene over and over again with new word balloons. If you're going to do a webcomic, please at least try a little harder.

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Re: Falconire, it's a style that can work, but you need to have really, really strong writing to be able to do it right.

In terms of the comic itself, it's not horrible. But it doesn't really stand on its own, in that I don't see it as something people would get excited about and come back to. If the writing improves, then it has a shot, but so far (albeit this is a very young comic) it's just not very interesting.
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I read all of them, and I think it's a really interesting idea, and it's pretty witty at times. For me, I think it'd be like one of the strips I casually look over on the Sunday paper, but don't see it as my main strip/source of entertainment.
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I'd have to agree with the other folks who have posted. I'm not a huge fan of comics that have one single panel repeated through the whole page, or in this case, twenty one pages. But every comic has potential to improve (including mine), so I won't condemn or put this one down.


Maybe if you found some other pictures of dead coyotes? :wink:
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I like it. It's clever. Also cutesy (in a gross kind of way). But where did you get that picture?
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